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earthangel On March 19, 2010




Sunbury On Thames, United King
#1New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:47:05
I came across this story while surfing the net, its very true these things happen, but i thought i would share it with you.. please read on ...

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town.
She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze.
How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be.

On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out.

There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right."

Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine.

Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass.

A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast.

As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride."

Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black.

She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive.

She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried.

"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"

The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died.
A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad."
This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

sarahf On October 08, 2013




ottawa, Canada
#2New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:50:36
tracyann38uk On July 02, 2006

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Middlesex, United Kingdom
#3New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:54:41
thats sad
wish_upon_a_star On February 18, 2006




rhyl, United Kingdom
#4New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:57:47
Shug On March 17, 2011




Dewsbury/Leeds, United Kingdom
#5New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:59:07
Man... if only I could be bothered to read all that...

I'd probably cry though.

Maybe.
Forget_About_Me On June 22, 2014
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#6New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 20:59:10
That is so sad
reiko On March 27, 2006

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New York, New York
#7New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:08:57
I shouldn't have read that.
misunderstood On June 24, 2014
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How about you come find me....
#8New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:10:19
I've read it before But apparently it's just an urban legend
treebee On April 13, 2015
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London, United Kingdom
#9New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:12:45
@shug Said
Man... if only I could be bothered to read all that...

I'd probably cry though.

Maybe.


Shug, man after my own heart!
sarahf On October 08, 2013




ottawa, Canada
#10New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:12:48
.. why does it ryme?
treebee On April 13, 2015
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#11New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:13:57
Sorry i cant read anything that will make me cry! But wanted to post on your thread!
earthangel On March 19, 2010




Sunbury On Thames, United King
#12New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 21:29:25
@treebee Said
Sorry i cant read anything that will make me cry! But wanted to post on your thread!




I know its a bit long winded, but i thought it was so sad, it choked me
tracyann38uk On July 02, 2006

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Middlesex, United Kingdom
#13New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 22:43:35
@earthangel Said
I know its a bit long winded, but i thought it was so sad, it choked me


it choked me 2 very sad
angelsue On January 03, 2011




liverpool, United Kingdom
#14New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 22:50:40
really sad and as you say s*** like that does happen
buzz22 On December 31, 2012




Galashiels, United Kingdom
#15New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 22:56:07
OMG!!!!! tht story was well sad
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