Song "I Am""I Am" plz read and comment thx!!!!!!!!

"I Am""I Am"
Ima a psycotic teen
who writes lyrics for hours and hours
whose a deranged human being
with spirits and emotions that are totally devoured
those who know my name
know its all about pain
getting cuts
losing your blood
spilling your guts
enjoying my fun
im waiting for the next person to buck
to have the nuts
to get up and jump
i got my knife in my right hand
ready to be the man
to make that stand
between going to heaven or hell
enjoying life as it is or life in a jail cellbehind bars
being given that chance to really think about my emotional scars
its impossiable to understand me
me and my killer instinc
and my enjoyment of watching people bleed
(Chorus) cause i am
who and what you cant understand
and i know your losing your mind cause i have the upperhand
this is just who i am
im the tormented soul you see in other lands
you feed off from my insanity
im who and what you cant understand (Chorus)x2

that suck a** lmao, jk and oh yea i know u luv this name =)

i thought it was very good... sad but well written, and it applys to I would imagine a rather large audience...

a young tfs audience?

thx i appreciate it alot but i dont know if i should keep wrriting these rhymes just keep coming to my head but i dont know if thier good enough to keep or what im lost should i keep writing?

dude this poem/song like totaly ROCKS lol

wicked poem

thank you all i really liked this one and im glad yall do to

i forgot i posted this lol :D its a good song i thought

yea i really appreciate these comments thx again

wow thats so me but i don lik seein othas bleed i lik seein myself bleed it makes me feel in control of my life wen i c my wrists bleedin i no im crazy and no matta wat i won stop cuttin i stopped 1 tim 4 som1 and i f***ed up and los that person so f*** it bac 2 the blade i go

well there are other alternatives then to cutting i found out but it was o late now i have to have these scars for the rest of my life but know that isnt the only relief i often open my bible up to get hope cause i know if i live right in this life and obey the bible GOD will reward me openly in front of his servents when i die

ya!

That's right! And that is exactly why you should never stop writing.
It is your outlet, your enjoyment, your very 'understanding' of yourself - to reflect back upon at any time you wish... And also, to share with the world, with all those who are going through what you are, and can relate. - Also, for those who cannot, so that they may understand.

God gave you a 'gift'. If you stop writing, you are throwing that gift away.