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Song "I Am""I Am" plz read and comment thx!!!!!!!!

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srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#1New Post! May 29, 2006 @ 14:58:35
"I Am""I Am"
Ima a psycotic teen
who writes lyrics for hours and hours
whose a deranged human being
with spirits and emotions that are totally devoured
those who know my name
know its all about pain
getting cuts
losing your blood
spilling your guts
enjoying my fun
im waiting for the next person to buck
to have the nuts
to get up and jump
i got my knife in my right hand
ready to be the man
to make that stand
between going to heaven or hell
enjoying life as it is or life in a jail cellbehind bars
being given that chance to really think about my emotional scars
its impossiable to understand me
me and my killer instinc
and my enjoyment of watching people bleed
(Chorus) cause i am
who and what you cant understand
and i know your losing your mind cause i have the upperhand
this is just who i am
im the tormented soul you see in other lands
you feed off from my insanity
im who and what you cant understand (Chorus)x2
p1mpmast3rfl3x On June 23, 2006




brevaed,
#2New Post! May 30, 2006 @ 12:41:00
that suck a** lmao, jk and oh yea i know u luv this name =)
vanders On December 13, 2014




, Australia
#3New Post! May 30, 2006 @ 12:42:46
i thought it was very good... sad but well written, and it applys to I would imagine a rather large audience...
sakina On May 04, 2007




Mesnil, Mauritius
#4New Post! May 30, 2006 @ 12:56:31
a young tfs audience?
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#5New Post! Jun 15, 2006 @ 04:55:36
thx i appreciate it alot but i dont know if i should keep wrriting these rhymes just keep coming to my head but i dont know if thier good enough to keep or what im lost should i keep writing?
emopoems On September 29, 2008




newcastle, United Kingdom
#6New Post! Jun 15, 2006 @ 10:31:51
dude this poem/song like totaly ROCKS lol
fallen_in_tears On March 25, 2010




Kent, United Kingdom
#7New Post! Jun 16, 2006 @ 10:28:10
wicked poem
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#8New Post! Sep 29, 2006 @ 05:11:26
thank you all i really liked this one and im glad yall do to
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#9New Post! Dec 05, 2006 @ 21:55:21
i forgot i posted this lol :D its a good song i thought
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#10New Post! Jan 24, 2007 @ 15:49:22
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#11New Post! Mar 26, 2007 @ 02:42:30
yea i really appreciate these comments thx again
onexsickxemoxchick On May 24, 2007




charlotte,
#12New Post! May 21, 2007 @ 17:03:34
wow thats so me but i don lik seein othas bleed i lik seein myself bleed it makes me feel in control of my life wen i c my wrists bleedin i no im crazy and no matta wat i won stop cuttin i stopped 1 tim 4 som1 and i f***ed up and los that person so f*** it bac 2 the blade i go
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#13New Post! Jun 07, 2007 @ 04:35:09
well there are other alternatives then to cutting i found out but it was o late now i have to have these scars for the rest of my life but know that isnt the only relief i often open my bible up to get hope cause i know if i live right in this life and obey the bible GOD will reward me openly in front of his servents when i die
srekins On April 10, 2017

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Canton, Georgia
#14New Post! Jun 26, 2007 @ 09:18:47
ya!
loveis On January 15, 2010
brat-inella


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In the mirror,
#15New Post! Jun 26, 2007 @ 23:25:37
@srekins Said
well there are other alternatives then to cutting i found out but it was o late now i have to have these scars for the rest of my life but know that isnt the only relief i often open my bible up to get hope cause i know if i live right in this life and obey the bible GOD will reward me openly in front of his servents when i die


That's right! And that is exactly why you should never stop writing.
It is your outlet, your enjoyment, your very 'understanding' of yourself - to reflect back upon at any time you wish... And also, to share with the world, with all those who are going through what you are, and can relate. - Also, for those who cannot, so that they may understand.

God gave you a 'gift'. If you stop writing, you are throwing that gift away.
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