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jonkers On April 26, 2012




brick, New Jersey
#1New Post! Apr 13, 2009 @ 18:08:26
if ever man has walked as far
to see a beauty like no other
as far imagintive as a star
unlike any his mind could discover
of soft spoken lines in a face
and gental vibe to match a voice
deep eyes that stare in space
a laugh to make the world rejoyce
a simple thought that could take away
hidden thoughts those sorrow feelings
that would cloud his mind everyday
and make it easier for all hes dealing
a soothing touch that makes him quiver
a softer meaning to warm his heart
the softest wishper would make him shiver
but he thinks he knows where to start
for her curves couldnt match a rolling hill
no shes beaten nature there
and a creasent moon couldnt steal
the way her smile dispearses fear
and nor a sound of even the sweetest tune
couldnt match the way i love to hear her speak
and a day in the warmest june
to her heart would seem altogther bleek
so what is it im here to understand
am i to stop searching this whole wide world
cause my heart tells me im a lucky man
and of everything i found the perfect girl
loveis On January 15, 2010
brat-inella


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In the mirror,
#2New Post! Apr 13, 2009 @ 18:24:38
"for her curves couldnt match a rolling hill
no shes beaten nature there"


I love this bit best...

Oh you should have been born at a much earlier date.

Great stuff!
jonkers On April 26, 2012




brick, New Jersey
#3New Post! Apr 13, 2009 @ 18:27:16
@loveis Said

"for her curves couldnt match a rolling hill
no shes beaten nature there"


I love this bit best...

Oh you should have been born at a much earlier date.

Great stuff!



thank you very much im glad to have gained a fan
sweetheart5545 On November 06, 2013




, Florida
#4New Post! Apr 13, 2009 @ 22:09:57
that's really great jonkers kudos
smilelove On September 01, 2013
Ninja Dreamer





Somewhere, Ohio
#5New Post! Apr 13, 2009 @ 22:50:56
That's really good.
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