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I AM

I am a tear glittering in the warm sun,

mistaken for a laugh.

I am a chair with three legs,

mistaken for four.

I am a cat sleeping in the sun,

mistaken for happiness.

I am a raging water fall,

mistaken for a trickling stream.

I am a smile in the dark of night,

mistaken for a quiet sleep.

I am a child looking for a lost doll,

mistaken for a child playing.

I am a quiet watcher, true thoughts silenced,

mistaken for a talker.

I am what I am.

It?s all inside, hidden from the world.

Looks, after all, can be deceiving

Good, all the examples of experience are wonderful. BRAVO

Thanks ^^

Are you trying to say that people are misled by appearances and don't see the real you on the inside? That is what I gathered. It is from your soul and it is beautiful.

Thats pretty much exactly what it means. And thanks ^^

This line is too long. It hurts the rythm somewhat.

Other than that i love it, very, very good poem.

I totally agree! Its really is good!

I noticed that, and I've been trying to think of a way to fix it. I haven't had much luck of yet though.

I loved it.

It rocks! Full of emotion and soul 2 things that i found were very importent to writing!

emotion is one of the main reasons I write. It's mainly a way of expressing for me.

I thought it was great!!

I am a silent watcher, whose true thoughts can not be spoken,

mistaken for an open and outspoken girl.

Here's what I would write. (And you can take it or leave it, I think your poem is beautiful how it is.)

"I am a quiet watcher, true thoughts silenced,
maistaken for a talker."

I must say, usually the repeat layout of a poem can get very redundant. But this poem is not. I like it.

ahh, yes. That is a better way to write it. Thanks ^^