heres a story

the more posts i get i'll put more of the story in. that way i'm not wasteing my time.


CLIFF part one

In sunny miami, cliff and is family are waching a street preformer. this is the first time they have been to florida so they are still tourists.
"dad, can i go explore the beach?" cliff'son said
"yes shure, but go with your mother and your sister."
"allright!" he was happy to be alowed to get away from the boring street acts.

Later, as the trio walked down the street going to the beach, a stranger walked up and started asking them,
"Hellow, i am new in town, can you show me the direction of the Clinton hotel?" he asked them.
"err, sorry, we are viseting here, do you know someone at the clinton?" Samantha, cliff's wife asks.
"ohh yes, and they can't help me. so please can you help me?"

thats all for now, if you guys want to hear more, please respond. untill then, Later

There wasnt really that much too it to have me wantin to see more just a few bits of dialogue lol

That wasn't very much at all . . . also, there were bad grammatical errors that amde it somewhat hard to read.

It's not just you, it's the crapyest thing i've ever written! sorry, i did the real story in paint, i can't copy it!