my poem this 1 makes me cry i made it wen i was going through a hard tym

My hart has gon through too much,
Yu took my love yu tuk my trust.
But I gues that wasn?t enough for yu
And now I don?t know what to do.
Because all I can do is cry at night
All I am is full of fright
I am so scared of what you will do
Because I know what you like and what is you
I guess I have to move on with out this now
Just don?t now what to do or even how.
Tears will go and time will pass
But my love will always last!
I will get on with the rest of my life I swear
I just don?t know what to do now your not there

I loved how I cud jst sit nd chil in ur arms
I loved how u?d pul me in with your charms
Your blue eyes were as blue as the see
I never could understand why you loved me
You where so brilliant such a catch
All people use to say we are a good match
You?re in those gals? eyes but not in her heart
You always were straight from the start
I know I seem clingy but I miss you so much
I miss all your kisses and your touch.
I thought everything was ok but it all broke down
I felt so stupid I felt like cupids clown
I can?t believe all lads are lame
I actually thought he wasn?t the same
But they all are, every single one
So out of my life I want all lads gone.

so sad and good you deserve hug

a beautiful sad poem that really touches the readers heart.

aww thnx lol thnx it always bloody makes me cry

it nearly made me,but you wrote in when you were going threw this so when you re read it all those raw emmotions come flooding back.i hope one day you will be able to read it without any tears cos this would have become a very good learning curve for you,untill then you have the right to cry over the reason why you wrote this and shared some of your bruised heart with us. x x

well i went through a tuff time with this guy who i loved yu mite think that jst cus i am 16 i cnt fall in love but i did i loved him so much and i miss him so much