Girl in a hole.

GIRL IN A HOLE

?HELP! I'M A GIRL IN A HOLE,? SAID THE GIRL IN THE HOLE...
?I FELL IN WHEN IT RAINED AND THE SIDES ARE ALL WET
I NEED THE LOO AND I'M HUNGRY,
MY CAT'S AT THE VET?

?PLEASE HELP! ! ! ? SCREAMED THE GIRL IN THE HOLE...
?I FELL ON MY HANDS AND I'VE BROKEN MY NAILS
I'M SQUEAMISH AND SOGGY,
I'M SURROUNDED BY SNAILS?

?I'M DROWNING! ! ! ?WAILED THE GIRL IN THE HOLE...
?I'M SWALLOWING WATER, I'M CATCHING MY DEATH
I'M SINKING I'M SINKING
I'M ALL OUT OF BREATH . . . . . . . . . .?

I want to knwo which came first...the pic or the poem? Which inspired which?

The poem came first, tis yet more of my time wasting at work. I am not sure i like the drawing much i kinda f***ed up the hands but I tend not to re do drawings ever they happen and are left how they are mistakes and all.

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I noticed the hands were a bit off. I like the poem, but I think a more panicked girl would suit it better-- maybe climbing? The snail is a great detail.

I think the girl's expression is right on the money.

The hands are weird but I love the drawing. And the poem.

But in the poem she's freaking out. In the pic she looks sort of resigned.

I love the pictures

Nice!

cheers and stuff, i may re draw then with the feedback given and post a few varients on the stress levels of girl in hole.

and with less f***ed up hands.

I like the girls hands.

you get a for being awesome then.

that is a really good and comical poem and drawing....yet another great one

lol i duno i can see someone making a weird kinda shape like that with their hands, not necessarily if they were trapped down a well, but deffo if they were in an akward situation

I like Vizzys idea of a scrambling to get out. It will be a little awkward to get right but i'm drawing better at the moment so yeah will try.