 firefly46
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Plymouth, United Kingdom
Joined: May 2009 |
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That feeling of hurt that comes from inside
If only it goes like when you swallow your pride,
If only you could pick it up and leave it behind,
For someone to pick up or someone to find.
Where ever you go, where ever you hide, it seems to find you and seems to follow
You can touch it, you can feel it when you see something you borrowed.
Your chest seems so heavy from carrying the weight.
It seem like it will be with you til you reach that pearly gate.
You live for that day for when it subsides
It looks a long way a way when you open your eyes,
It teases you, taunts you, when your defences are down,
It pinches you, punches you, when you are down on the ground.
The people around you, are helping you now,
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Allyson
| Very good poem,It truly explains the feeling of being hurt and the feelings you have at that time |
xlilnatx
| | wow, that poems mint, every word of that is so true.. i think i can speak for everyone,, to say that we've all felt like that and gotten stronge again.. |
Moomin
| | Wow babe, very well written |
firefly46
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Thanks, I am learning from the master  |
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Feelings of Hurt
August 21, 2009 @ 01:05:56 pm
