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MirLou On November 18, 2013




Cork, Ireland
#1New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 16:35:05
As I lie on my bed with my leg raised high
I watch with a glistening eye at a sight
The clouds are swiftly and silently passing
Onward at a rate and without a blight.

The colours and shapes are a fascination
The flurry white curls as the dark builds up
There is rain sure coming and the sun is hid
For moisture and rainbow can not be seen.

The blue that peeps out as they speed on their way
Is every so cheerful, it gladdens my heart today
Then out pops the sun as those clouds pass away
The rays beam in the window, the sky's no more grey.

Penned this evening, April 27th
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xnuvax On April 06, 2010

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SYDNEY, Australia
#2New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 16:38:58
Awww I love this. Another great one!

Me prefers rain and gloomy weather though!
MirLou On November 18, 2013




Cork, Ireland
#3New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 16:52:53
@xnuvax Said

Awww I love this. Another great one!

Me prefers rain and gloomy weather though!



You're so sweet. I can't believe you found it and were able to reply so fast. Thanks again.

Will try write one about the rain we had this morning for you!!

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xnuvax On April 06, 2010

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SYDNEY, Australia
#4New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 16:56:24
@MirLou Said

You're so sweet. I can't believe you found it and were able to reply so fast. Thanks again.

Will try write one about the rain we had this morning for you!!



Yes please!! I love the rain!!
Washes away your sorrows..."tears from the stars"
Octavarium On December 23, 2021




Pacific North West,
#5New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 16:58:09
Nicely done. Has a good ray of happiness coming through
Charles On November 16, 2010




, Christmas Island
#6New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 17:12:09
Hold onto the rain down south. It's blue skies and fluffy cotton clouds here.
loveis On January 15, 2010
brat-inella


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In the mirror,
#7New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 17:27:28
Very pretty, 'picturesque' poem!
The_Astronomer On June 26, 2010

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, United Kingdom
#8New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 18:37:49
That's nice Mirlou
MirLou On November 18, 2013




Cork, Ireland
#9New Post! Apr 27, 2009 @ 20:53:24
Thanks to each one for your lovely kind comments. I didn't think I had got it together well at all, but you give me confidence to try again.

Best wishes to you all.

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ReAdSaLoT On September 23, 2019




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#10New Post! Apr 28, 2009 @ 00:13:28
Very touching and well written/Jazz
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