Waste of Time, Waste of money...

To whom it may possibly concern
I've given my all to this endless burn
A letter to friends shall not cure all
But maybe show understanding to my downfall
I worked so hard to make my return
To come back to what I left in turn
To bring myself back to the place I hated
To visit my friends that left me frustrated
A waste of time, a waste of money
For no one even cared, Was not even funny

I sat around waiting for them to call
A barely heard a single whisper come from the wall
I had to beg for an ounce of attention
Between friends there should be some affection
Not an ounce I found through out my stay
I wish i never came, Just stayed away
The cold shoulder i got from many, not all
But in the end i felt like jumping to my fall
I regret this decision, just like many others
The only ones who cared were my closest brothers
For that I am thankfull for i truely love them
But I feel I will never come feel the need to come again.
For so much money, so much time wasted
Now all I feel is a sad and lonely hatred

From this day on I'll forget what was here
I will not look back untill I finally hear
A true sound of caring from someone I knew
Maybe if Im lucky I'll hear more than just a few.

I loved that poem,it had so much feeling in it..
Thank You for sharing it..

That's an excellent poem! Well-done! x

me too

Very sad, deep feeling portrayed. Soulfelt poems really hit home. Well written.

Woo man that was... lovely... Really felt what you were feeling in there...and actually connected with it a bit too... been in sort of the same situation, i think.. we moved down to alabama to be closer to our family...because they always talk about how they need us closer and want to spend more time with us and such so we actually move down there and it turns into a ghost town... maybe thats not the exact same situation but its somewhat... and a little bit more underneath from some other stuff that i don't care to share... well..ok enough of my life story... i keep doing other stuff and losing trrack of what im saying. all in all, you did a wonderful job

Excellent job with that poem. Very relatable in its feeling. Thumbs up to you brother.