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sublimeluvinme On July 02, 2010




MoCounty, New Jersey
#1New Post! Apr 11, 2009 @ 00:51:12
Scream at me - let the world know you are disgusted
Disgusted with my existence and actions
Actions, which i regret more than words could ever express
Espress that you are full of hatred
Hatred is porportionate to passion once felt

Tell me you loathe me- At least then you would feel something
Something is better than nothing
Nothing wouild make you indifferent- it would make me nobody
Nobody spcial- nothing more than a means to an end
End of lonliness, a break in the silence, a moment from isolation

Declare your resentment and your longing for liberation
Liberation from this bitterness that engulfs you
you would admit then you are having a hard time with this
this seperation, the fact i am not around
around for you to affirm i am not suffering in vain
loveis On January 15, 2010
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In the mirror,
#2New Post! Apr 11, 2009 @ 01:01:34
Good stuff there!
Octavarium On December 23, 2021




Pacific North West,
#3New Post! Apr 11, 2009 @ 01:55:48
You have a great sense for expression and wording, keep it up.
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