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psycoskunk On December 24, 2020
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#16New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 22:35:52
@NNewt84 Said
I mean, wouldn't you be annoyed if you kept trying to convince someone of what should be common sense, but they just wouldn't get it?


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NNewt84 On July 19, 2018




Adelaide, Australia
#17New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 23:20:38
@chaski Said

Your version of Lisa is apparently unlike the Simpson's version.



So... Lisa never gets angry?
chaski On April 19, 2024
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#18New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 23:41:28
@NNewt84 Said

So... Lisa never gets angry?


You do realize that Lisa is a fictional character with a certain set of behavioral patterns and was created by Matt Groening not by you...right?
LuckyCharms On July 31, 2021
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#19New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 23:57:27
@chaski Said

You do realize that Lisa is a fictional character with a certain set of behavioral patterns and was created by Matt Groening not by you...right?



No. That would require a firmer grasp upon reality.

Just sayin'.
restoreone On January 30, 2022




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#21New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 00:29:17
chaski On April 19, 2024
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#22New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 00:53:13
@NNewt84 Said

So how come it's fine for her to complain about sexism in a plastic doll, but not in a movie?



Ok...again, you do realize that Lisa Simpson is not real...right?

And you do also realize that the dialogue that you are referring to is fictional and created by yourself....right?

These are things that you invented....except the original Lisa Simpson character, which was created by Matt Groening.

They are not real.

I ask you again, and I am not being a mean ass-tard, I am honestly asking out of concern: Do you have dissociative identity disorder?

Because is seems like your grasp of what is real and what is not real is tenuous at best.
twilitezone911 On March 25, 2019




Saint Louis, Missouri
#23New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 00:59:39
the op's storyline- I think it was good about a start of the story about the disease.

that is good leading, this nonsense of reboot of " ghostbusters " and having lisa and bart simpson explain this logical of the op's philosophy.

is relevant, because you lost audience.

first, lisa and bart is wrong vehicles are too young understand what are explaining. why two kids talking about this? what if young teenagers are read your post on the website, they would have no idea, what the op is talking about.

the op is writing two different things are not connect with each other.
chaski On April 19, 2024
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#25New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 01:13:51
@NNewt84 Said


As chaski said, it's a cartoon, so it doesn't have to be 100% realistic.



However, what you are doing is manipulating someone else's fictional characters to suit your personal agenda, and then talking about them as if they are real people...
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#27New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 01:23:13
@NNewt84 Said

But how is Lisa being a feminist in any way manipulating her character to fit my agenda? Isn't that one of her defining traits?


sigh

@NNewt84 Said

And when did I indicate that she's real in any way?


Just a few posts back....well actually with most of your posts.

And thus I honestly feel like you have a serious issue distinguishing reality from fiction.

Maybe you should go back and start reading your own posts with a critical eye.
twilitezone911 On March 25, 2019




Saint Louis, Missouri
#28New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 01:27:54
@NNewt84 Said

Well, on the show, Lisa often take up causes that involve feminism or some other political movement most kids her age wouldn't normally give a s*** about, so I don't really see how this is out of character for her.

Also, wasn't there a Simpsons episode ("Once Upon A Time In Springfield" ) where Bart got really mad because The Krusty the Klown Show got a female star who, like, made the show really girly, so he decided to make some change about it? So, again, I don't really get how it's any different for him to express similar feelings about the new Ghostbusters movie.

As chaski said, it's a cartoon, so it doesn't have to be 100% realistic. Yes, there are shows like Arthur and Jakers! that actually portray realistic kid characters dealing with realistic kid problems, but The Simpsons isn't among them - like many shows, it has its own rules and it sticks with them, and Lisa being unrealistically politically aware for her age has been established as one of those rules in early seasons, with episodes like "Lisa vs. Malibu Stacy" and "The Old Man and the Lisa". So, again, how is it unrealistic for her to complain about sexism in Hollywood?



you know that fox won't any episode of " the simpsons " that will deals with any of these views of yours.

I haven't watch " the simpsons " for a quite awhile. I got turn off by the horrible " the simpson movie ".

if I watch these two episodes above, you mention. I would have an open mind, because of the style, that I remember of the characters of the show, not what the writers have wrote.

what you wrote sound more adult than child would understand. I am not sure if a teenager would understand.

why would everybody care what you preaching, if the simpsons would never saying about this stuff, you are preaching on the tv show.

I do understand when lisa would grew up, defending woman's right and being feminism.

what is lisa'a age on the show now? is she 22 now? she is under 10 like she look like, where would lisa get these ideas from.

yes, I can see bart might understand some of these things. if he like " alex Keaton " on " family ties".

I think you need better characters represent this storyline not lisa and bart simpson.
chaski On April 19, 2024
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#30New Post! Dec 20, 2016 @ 01:47:04
@NNewt84 Said

What, you mean like when I said she got worked up and snapped? That's what you were referring to? ... You realise I meant she got worked up and snapped in story, right? Seems like you're the one who cannot separate fiction from reality.



As I said, you should go back and look at YOUR posts with a critical eye...and not just on this topic.
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