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the bottle
August 26, 2009 @ 11:26:30 pm
an old man shaking the bottle to find his wife.
i think i almost saw her wave goodbye/
hunched over the desk he no longer used.
while the answer to life lays beneath some tattered work books.
the calendar is printed 1991.
the clock singing all the time that has run.
but the man shakes and shakes to see the woman he loved.
for he accidentally dropped her inside one time.
the place clutter at every move you make.
while the man shakes hunched over his rusting desk.
he yells for her to come back and be well.
i wonder if he can hear her in the bottle she fell.
"old man, old man." life sings with the clock. "-forget the woman that your death has shocked.
but then a smile appeared in the bottle he shook.
about to take her out
he fell in too....

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ale_latina

New Post! November 11, 2009 @ 08:12:20 am
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oh.my.goodness.

I loveee this!

1991? i think i know whY! wait..no,no. i don't. lol.

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