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The Perfect Bow.[short poem]
August 18, 2010 @ 07:37:46 am
..:: The Perfect Bow ::..

The Ribbon is coming undone.
The Red Laces are swiftly moving
Unraveling the Perfect bow
That it had created.
Soon everything that was tightly tied
has moved into its own disunity.

They fall
They break
They shatter
They make their isolated holes
Never to be held by that same ribbon again

The Red laces of that beautiful Ribbon
So smooth and tender it lyes there
waiting...
To be tied in that Perfect Bow
again


..::Fede::..

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Fede88

New Post! August 18, 2010 @ 07:38:55 am
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Written for a lost Friendship of mine.


Ko

\\m/(>.<)\\m/

New Post! August 18, 2010 @ 07:39:38 am
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Beautiful, man!


Fede88

New Post! August 18, 2010 @ 07:42:12 am
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@Ko Said

Beautiful, man!



thanks =]


Xavery

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New Post! August 19, 2010 @ 04:44:22 am
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Well done!


Fede88

New Post! August 19, 2010 @ 04:53:28 am
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@Xavery Said

Well done!



Thanks =)


Xavery

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New Post! August 19, 2010 @ 05:15:34 am
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Your welcome. It is not a sappy love poem or sappy. It shows thoughtfulness.

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