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my script... what do ya think???

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radicolpotato

magna,

Dec 21, 2009 @ 02:29:29

the name is pending. but i would really appreciate it if you read it and tell me what ya think. thanx ^_^

https://pc.celtx.com/project/pCovUirPBqI5/view/http%3A%2F%2Fceltx.com%2Fres%2F1kEqvojZWTHA

Edited: December 21, 2009 @ 02:30

Pantagruel

salford, Pennsylvania

Dec 21, 2009 @ 20:01:30

cross-dressing johnny? pretty weird. I donno, wasnt that into it, I guess. too short, not much happening. not very vivid, you know? sorry, it could use improvement. good luck working on it.

radicolpotato

magna,

Dec 21, 2009 @ 22:19:40

@Pantagruel Said

cross-dressing johnny? pretty weird. I donno, wasnt that into it, I guess. too short, not much happening. not very vivid, you know? sorry, it could use improvement. good luck working on it.

alright, thanx for your input brother ^_^

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