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sue2 On August 15, 2011

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cornwall, United Kingdom
#1New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:04:30
Huddled in the drafty doorway
frost, snow and ice settling
on his battered cardboard blanket.
Clutching and holding tightly
the bag containing his life.
Broken clothes, body and dreams
completely gone, lost, forgotten.
People rushing by, no time to spare
no thought given to the
bundle of rags.

Sue
Peach09 On August 06, 2009

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, Michigan
#2New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:06:22
very nice
sue2 On August 15, 2011

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cornwall, United Kingdom
#3New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:16:48
Thank you very much xx
ReAdSaLoT On September 23, 2019




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#4New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:25:50
Very nice,very sad.
friendlybear On March 10, 2010

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Nanaimo, Canada
#5New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:27:07
@sue2 Said

Huddled in the drafty doorway
frost, snow and ice settling
on his battered cardboard blanket.
Clutching and holding tightly
the bag containing his life.
Broken clothes, body and dreams
completely gone, lost, forgotten.
People rushing by, no time to spare
no thought given to the
bundle of rags.

Sue


That used to be me. Thanks for not looking through me.
sue2 On August 15, 2011

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cornwall, United Kingdom
#6New Post! Jul 31, 2009 @ 20:28:22
Thanks so much for taking the time to read xx
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