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jonkers On April 26, 2012

brick, New Jersey
#1New Post! Apr 23, 2009 @ 04:28:13
is it the sense that im feeling
that has my mind asking how
it seems these thoughts that im dealing
with all come down to now
cause i met a person who from the start
brought with her a glow
one thats seems to warm my heart
more then yet she even knows
though its hard to push so far, so fast
cause i dont want to come off to crazy
but i wonder how long a night would last
is she was to lay there next to me
and i try not to stare into her eyes
more less scared of what ill see
cause i dont want to see feelings behind lies
or maybe ill see she feels exactly just like me
but the time is to soon is it not
cause i dont wanna chance and regret
but how do i have all the thoughts i got
for we barely just even met
worpd201 On June 15, 2020
The Muffin Man.

Manistee, Michigan
#2New Post! Apr 23, 2009 @ 04:36:13
Great poem. I'm a romantic at heart, so i know what it feels like.
loveis On January 15, 2010


In the mirror,
#3New Post! Apr 23, 2009 @ 05:35:36
Oh yeah..been there, done that..nice work! 8)
sweetheart5545 On November 06, 2013

, Florida
#4New Post! May 04, 2009 @ 16:12:26
that's a very lovely poem
flange666 On May 02, 2012

, United Kingdom
#5New Post! May 04, 2009 @ 16:14:11
Jonkers beautiful poem
hope On March 17, 2015

haifa, Israel
#6New Post! May 31, 2009 @ 11:20:35
Nice poem Jonker.
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