back to the light "please read and comment"

this feelings like holding a breeath i cant take
so how does it seem your sweeter then air
and my heart seems to suffacate
cause im wishing you are always there
its like those nights you look off afar
only then to see the sky clouded in
how you feel lonley not to see a star
its that feeling that i have with in
within is mind cause your never to distant
and how i can try to push it out
but its seems the image is resistant
cause my hearts doing with out
with out is the touch of you soft skin
the gentle words of your voice
a look of belonging from your sly grin
and now its my time to make a choice
but see my thoughts are thinking to deeply
its like im trying to make this a reality
but im only finding myself weeping
cause i cant get these words out of me
so what am i to do when i cant see the light
looking through the darkness of question
cause im inclosed by the darken night
but to a helping suggestion
if anyone out there can help me
to find my guided way to the light
the light of love thats so far gone completly
and left all dark that once was bright

I feel this poem as well. You've got talent and I can certainly relate to a lot of the poems you write. Great work.

thank you so much

very good poem