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NNewt84 On July 19, 2018




Adelaide, Australia
#1New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 12:44:44
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12191058/1/Lisa-vs-Ms-Male-Characters-Part-1

Feel free to critique it as you will.
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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#2New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 17:01:05
And his is at it again...
adrinachrome On April 04, 2023




Fukitall, Arizona
#3New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 17:30:49
I read it beginning to end.


You need to see someone about this newt. First i thought it was just weird now im sure that this is a problem for you. You need help man. Im serious this is unhealthy.
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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Tree at Floydgirrl's Window,
#4New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 17:38:14
@adrinachrome Said

I read it beginning to end.


You need to see someone about this newt. First i thought it was just weird now im sure that this is a problem for you. You need help man. Im serious this is unhealthy.



Same.
psycoskunk On December 24, 2020
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#5New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 18:21:20
I know that fanfics are supposed to be the author's original story/interpretations of the characters, but.....

...I'm pretty sure that Lisa Simpson wouldn't call anyone a f***ing retard.
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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Tree at Floydgirrl's Window,
#7New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:04:08
@NNewt84 Said

You know, just reading that sentence alone made me giggle, and I actually went back and read it just to see where she says that.



Well, by that point, Lisa was just so frustrated and angry with everyone praising Ghostbusters as the hot new feminist movie to go to, that she pretty much just snapped right there, when she couldn't get it through that feminist's thick skull. I mean, wouldn't you be annoyed if you kept trying to convince people of what should be common sense, but they just wouldn't get it?


What you mean is that you took the Lisa character and changed it so you could use it as a tool to, once again, complain about the evils of feminism.

PS
You've told us that you never watched the new Ghostbusters, so actually you don't actually know if it is a "feminist movie" or not.
floydgirrl On October 08, 2022
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#8New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:07:11
Eaglebauer On July 23, 2019
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#9New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:10:06
NNewt84 On July 19, 2018




Adelaide, Australia
#10New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:19:40
@chaski Said

PS
You've told us that you never watched the new Ghostbusters, so actually you don't actually know if it is a "feminist movie" or not.


But even people who haven't seen the film know that they just replaced the lead actors with women, thus using the "Ms. Male Character" trope - which feminists themselves have stated they dislike. So isn't that antifeminist in of itself?
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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#12New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:41:35
@NNewt84 Said

which feminists themselves have stated they dislike. So isn't that antifeminist in of itself?


So now you are saying that the movie is both feminist and antifeminist at the same time, even though you haven't yet watched.

Brilliant.
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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Tree at Floydgirrl's Window,
#13New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 21:42:38
@NNewt84 Said


you know, the "f***ing retard" line.



As a starting point.
NNewt84 On July 19, 2018




Adelaide, Australia
#14New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 22:24:25
@chaski Said

As a starting point.



Well, again, I'd like to iterate that Lisa was just so worked up by that point that she pretty much just snapped, so it's not like she would, you know, think about what she said, you know?
chaski On about 5 hours ago
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Tree at Floydgirrl's Window,
#15New Post! Dec 19, 2016 @ 22:35:02
@NNewt84 Said

Well, again, I'd like to iterate that Lisa was just so worked up by that point that she pretty much just snapped, so it's not like she would, you know, think about what she said, you know?


Your version of Lisa is apparently unlike the Simpson's version.
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