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The rose that shall never wither.

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aerphyn On October 31, 2007




UK, United Kingdom
#1New Post! Sep 16, 2007 @ 18:27:28
(I started this poem before I registered to theforumsite but I never bothered finishing it. Oh well, here it is )

Oh, thy beauteous one,
My heart subjugated yet again by your presence,
Your voice mellifluous alike a goddess,
Your hair's enticing alike the blooming rose,
The Beauty whom Time cannot diminish.

My heart pounds each time you curve your lips,
Harder than each petal tries to bloom to life,
In life there must be you,
In death I'll seek you out,
The Beauty whom Time cannot diminish.

Tis Rose I bring forth for you,
A sign of my everlasting love for you,
A symbol of your everlasting Beauty,
The Beauty whom Time cannot diminish,
The Rose that shall never wither.
scribble36 On December 06, 2007




dublin, Ireland
#2New Post! Sep 17, 2007 @ 08:56:46
aerphyn On October 31, 2007




UK, United Kingdom
#3New Post! Sep 18, 2007 @ 08:14:00
sicros On November 28, 2008

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Dothan, Alabama
#4New Post! Sep 21, 2007 @ 23:04:07

i dont really know its ok it sounds like a stalker poem. IF your were a little more confident in what you thought about it id like it better overal i think its good tough.
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