Nice Day ( a very offensive, unfinished and scathing poem)

f*** your life- your hopes and dreams
they boil down to an obscenity
a mockery
of what life's supposed to be
Knock Knock its reality and its time for your life to cease

f*** your life- your sorrows and strife
thinking you've got a story to tell
Thought you escaped the hell of your life
news flash, your still there, and i am as well

f*** your fads and the mindset behind them
you all think your unique, but I saw it begin
Wear your skinny yellow jeans that make it hard to s***
go along with someone elses ideas with no thought about it

And to the gangstas out there
your all just as fake as the scene kids' hair
you are the cause of racial profiling
you, YOURSELF, say you rep the 313

So now you're talking to me and you're starting to b****
about life turning the corner only to find s***
what the hell did you expect when your only goal is to become rich?
I shake my head at you fools as I fill up the ditch

When the "bomb" comes, you know you deserved it
You played the game, idolized fame, here's your prize you've earned this
and as the explosion tears your life away
I hope your last day was a nice day :D

Nice.

so why the straight outta compton song? ive heard it a few times, are you implying that i stole it? i see this more as grand master flash meets hollywood undead with a writer who barely has any experience writing rap. but if you are insisting that i have some how (to use my own terminology) yoinked it, then break it down and prove it. SHOW ME THE MONEY

Good grief

why? just a thought strand lol. you dont have to believe your poetry, you just have to be able to believe it. if that makes any sense. Im just experimenting with anger as a medium as opposed to sarcastic apathy or bitterness. shouting as opposed to monotone.

Ohhh okay. You had me going there for a minute.

It's very true, the gangster part.

Yeah, im thinking about adding to that, but i have no idea how venomous to be, because anything towards gangstas can be taken as racism by those looking for something to pick over.

Damn. What's with all the vaguely-defined pessimism today?

Exactly how was that very offensive?

Load of f***ing s***e.You are a worthless c***,go and do the world a favour and hang yourself.

aha, so it shall be a match between wits now. i wrote something to show off my intellect, and ill be back with it. IT HAS BEGUN!! que mortal kombat theme song

Wow, touchy?
And how is 'yoink' your own terminology? That's been a commonly used term for years. Yoink