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bjizzle On July 01, 2007




Chehalis, Washington
#1New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 18:06:28
This is me tryin to rap.. OK??


Out of the northwest
you can call me the best
i break some sick flows
then stop to rest
im the next born leader
always carry my heater
cuz if you try to contess
youll meet mr. 4 beater
jus call me BJizzle
cuz i rhyme with a sizzle
now u kno im the best
cuz im a fine dime dizzle!!!

Pretty good u think??
perspicacious On November 28, 2014




?, United Kingdom
#2New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 18:08:06
Shizzle.
nirvanachick On February 19, 2008




, New Jersey
#3New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 18:54:29
always carry my heater sorry hun but that lines gotta go




yo so my names torrie
& heres my story
your gd rap
was so friggin borin!!

ballin! haha jk.
MonkeyMadness On April 08, 2015
Lord of your mum





Big Tree, United Kingdom
#4New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 19:06:03
@nirvanachick Said
always carry my heater


i agree, lame!

the rest was suprisingly ok though
nirvanachick On February 19, 2008




, New Jersey
#5New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 19:09:09
@monkeymadness Said
i agree, lame!

the rest was suprisingly ok though


yeah. twas ok, could use some work tho. but not bad for a start..
bjizzle On July 01, 2007




Chehalis, Washington
#6New Post! Jun 19, 2007 @ 19:39:47
Come on u got to say its okay for coming out of Chehalis WA!!
genyus On July 03, 2007




g'ville, Florida
#7New Post! Jul 01, 2007 @ 23:17:37
yo
my mystical ritual
combines lyrical miricals
and im energized material
ya feeling cause its spiritual
when my ghost becomes physical
ill approach to deminish you
and set fire to ya soul
no fire hose can estinguish through
i got killer intentions
i move in bigger deminshens
and my trigga i rippen through b***hs
as i continue typin this sentence
and i will slay every witness
till im so rich it ridiculouse
and i spit all this wickedness
cause i was born to be kickin this
showstopper On September 02, 2010




Crossville, Tennessee
#8New Post! Sep 02, 2010 @ 21:09:34
@bjizzle Said

This is me tryin to rap.. OK??


Out of the northwest
you can call me the best
i break some sick flows
then stop to rest
im the next born leader
always carry my heater
cuz if you try to contess
youll meet mr. 4 beater
jus call me BJizzle
cuz i rhyme with a sizzle
now u kno im the best
cuz im a fine dime dizzle!!!

Pretty good u think??



i think its awesome
someone_else On August 30, 2012
Not a dude.


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American Alps, Washington
#9New Post! Sep 02, 2010 @ 22:01:33
@bjizzle Said

Come on u got to say its okay for coming out of Chehalis WA!!



Can any good thing come from Chehalis?

Oh haha. I just noticed the date on this thread.
Wellard On April 29, 2012
ect.. .


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In your Mind, Cape Verde
#10New Post! Sep 02, 2010 @ 22:02:20
Took me a couple of mins to scribe this..whaddayareckon?

In eternal blackness, in the midst of the darkest night
Proteins and minerals, exist within specks of light
Solids liquids and gases, and sparks of light within
infinite lengths and widths and depths and heights
No beginning or ending, the seven dimensions
Enough space for more than a million words and inventions
To travel through time within enough room to be the womb
of the most high's great mind which he will soon make shine
With intelligent elements in sight that he will gather
In the realms of relativity electricity struck matter
Energies explode he below to keep releasin
Atoms by the millions, til the numbers increasin
Til it was burnin he kept returnin itself to the source
The hotter his thoughts it gave the center more force
He gave birth to the sun which would follow his laws
All caused by his mental intercourse, who is God?

He began to explain his craft, the master in the attic
He dealt with measurements his language, was mathematics
His theoretical wisdom of the numerical system
The complete number nine which means born or existed
He gave birth to all planets, inorganic, and organic
So you wouldn't take it for granted
They rotated they own distance around the sun
And fully submit to the existance of one
And each one was promised everlasting perfection
If each one keeps spinnin in the same direction
To the East, and each speak the motion of peace
and harmony, and each show devotion to teach
The universe is to come, the whole world must go according
Know your galaxies and mirages stars start fallin
So stay in your orbit maintain safe and sound
Like the planets each cipher remains perfectly round

From unconciousness, to conciousness
By knowledging his wisdom his response is this
A understanding, which is the best part
He picked the third planet where new forms of life would start
He pursued show and prove every move in order
Back to the source he let off his resources in the water
Climb his climax, where the climate is at, high degrees
See he start to breathe deep in the darkest seas
And the plan is, to lay in the clays to form land
And expand, usin the same clays to born man
In his own image our origin begins in the East
Culture rise to breed, with the powers of peace
Deal in equality nature's policy is to be God
Build or destroy positively born life like Allah
And each one was given everlasting perfection
If each one keep living in the same direction
And life was life, and love was love
We went according by the laws of the world above
They showed us physically, we could reach infinity
But mentally, through the century we lost our identity
Life start and ending, we got trife and started sinning
Lost touch with the beginning now ciphers stop spinnin
And what was once easy became confused and hard
Which brings us back, to the mystic question, who is God?
Sixty-six trillion years since his face was shown
When the seventh angel appears, the mystery will be known
Check Revelations and Genesis, St. Luke and John
It even tells us we are Gods in the Holy Qu'ran
Wisdom Strength and Beauty, one of the meanings of God
G.O.D. you and me ?Gomars O Dubar?
Knowledge Wisdom Understanding Sun Moon and Star
Man Woman and Child, and so is Allah
MartynPalmer On April 04, 2011




Bristol, United Kingdom
#11New Post! Sep 07, 2010 @ 15:36:11
bjizzle? your name shoulda been BJlittle / you little d***ed prick quit whining these rhymes / stop wastin my time / nirvanachick'll get pummeled by my atomic bionic missle balistics / tick tick tick suicide bomber forensics / well wellard your writings not well hard / screw up the paper put it in a furnace / need an analogy I be like a cyclone turnin / my speech hit a beat like a cyclone turnin
Wellard On April 29, 2012
ect.. .


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In your Mind, Cape Verde
#12New Post! Sep 07, 2010 @ 18:52:54
@MartynPalmer Said

bjizzle? your name shoulda been BJlittle / you little d***ed prick quit whining these rhymes / stop wastin my time / nirvanachick'll get pummeled by my atomic bionic missle balistics / tick tick tick suicide bomber forensics / well wellard your writings not well hard / screw up the paper put it in a furnace / need an analogy I be like a cyclone turnin / my speech hit a beat like a cyclone turnin




Martyn Palmer little schoolgirl charmer.
MartynPalmer On April 04, 2011




Bristol, United Kingdom
#13New Post! Sep 07, 2010 @ 21:27:36
Imaginative..
RamsdenXS On February 20, 2012




Sheffield,
#14New Post! Feb 20, 2012 @ 10:50:09
@bjizzle Said

This is me tryin to rap.. OK??


Out of the northwest
you can call me the best
i break some sick flows
then stop to rest
im the next born leader
always carry my heater
cuz if you try to contess
youll meet mr. 4 beater
jus call me BJizzle
cuz i rhyme with a sizzle
now u kno im the best
cuz im a fine dime dizzle!!!


Dude, you'll never defeat me!
I'd creep up on you like a ninja and slit your throat discretely,
Bjizzle? You got tobe joking right?
Compared to yours my lyrics are like kryptonite, I'm superman, your the Villan, at the end of this battle there'll only b one blood type spilling! 
It ain't mine, you see I'm Apositive
And When it comes to battling, I'm so f***ing competitive,
I Act first, call the first blow,
that way it's me that's always stealing the show! So relax and just sit the f*** down bro! You see this battle for you is just one big no go! Biatchh!


Pretty good u think??
bossman On June 17, 2012




London, United Kingdom
#15New Post! Jun 15, 2012 @ 17:38:10
can some1 tell me if dis my rap is gud i onlywrote abit..

prick mudafuka, pussybwoy start runnin
i shoot mudafuka, pussy start duckin
fuk u mudafuka, pussy start sweatin
coz he got scared,den pussy start cryiin


tell me if its gud and im writtin some moree.
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