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Cpat92 On May 16, 2021
It's all or nothing





Lauderhill, Florida
#1New Post! Mar 26, 2020 @ 04:10:04
Constant single cycle
Meet a woman
Fall for her
Lose hope after welcoming fear
Lose interest and welcome hate
After each cycle
I tend to feel worse than before
I guess I've been a loner for so long
It's impossible to break the cycle
Whoever God has for me
Has yet to be found
Or is it just that luck despises me
Chooses to punish me for my past
And laugh at my misery
I don't want to be alone anymore
I wish to have a genuine smile again
And to stop shedding tears in silence



I don't usually post my poems on here but I just wanted to share this one.
Gryphaena On May 08, 2020




Chula Vista, California
#2New Post! May 08, 2020 @ 00:49:25
Hello, it's too bad no one has commented on your poem.

I don't know very much about poetry, but I think your poem was free verse because there was no discernible rhyme scheme.

I hope you know that you are enough & your worth does not depend on finding a lady.

Maybe you're lonely, but keep holding on. :]
SunflowerPerson On June 24, 2020




Laveen,
#3New Post! Jun 21, 2020 @ 21:48:05
Ah, Nice poem dude. just thought I'd drop in to say so. Also, I'm sure you'll find somebody, just probably when you are not looking.
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