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MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#1New Post! Sep 28, 2009 @ 22:30:30
my heart kept getting swollen every time he spoke.
saying how i will never amount to anything if i don't follow
his religious rules.
how he has a place for me up above.
where humans are mutating with wings and can fly.
i bit my lip as the blood drip from my mouth.
not paying attention he just went on and on.
i took a step back so i won't stain his robe.
it was so white like fresh cut up snow.
his hands moved not getting to the point.
i couldn't focus i was totally disjoint.
i smiled when he met my eyes swallowing back blood
pretending that i didn't have my heart tipping of my tongue.
he was almost finish saying all that i should know.
then "POP!" i hurl my heart all over the floor.
lilbear On January 18, 2010
Aequitas / Veritas!


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, Canada
#2New Post! Sep 29, 2009 @ 01:14:47
spadge On February 18, 2010
Aging Disgracefully


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Santa Land, United Kingdom
#3New Post! Sep 29, 2009 @ 01:17:02
Wha? I'm not sure how to comment on this.
lilbear On January 18, 2010
Aequitas / Veritas!


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, Canada
#4New Post! Sep 29, 2009 @ 01:21:15
@spadge Said

Wha? I'm not sure how to comment on this.



The same way I did!
spadge On February 18, 2010
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Santa Land, United Kingdom
#5New Post! Sep 29, 2009 @ 01:24:19
@lilbear Said

The same way I did!


I concur.
MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#6New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 04:38:13
lol thanks?....
CannonJnr On May 09, 2012




Oxford, United Kingdom
#7New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 04:43:52
mistyblues On January 15, 2010

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, Greece
#8New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 04:46:44
What mean you here? I no understand.
incognito On February 26, 2010
Giddy In The Pants


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, Canada
#9New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 04:49:14
Wow. Pretty creative! Good job.
MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#10New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:00:32
@mistyblues Said

What mean you here? I no understand.



lol what?

MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#11New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:00:59
@CannonJnr Said




CannonJnr On May 09, 2012




Oxford, United Kingdom
#12New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:04:09
lol ill need to read it again tomorrow im to tired to take it in. its interesting though to say the least
MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#13New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:06:37
@CannonJnr Said

lol ill need to read it again tomorrow im to tired to take it in. its interesting though to say the least


oh thanks i was getting freaked out by all the silent comments
mistyblues On January 15, 2010

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, Greece
#14New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:25:03
@MonicaTheGreat Said

lol what?




I say, what mean you by this? Supposed to be written from respect of Lord, or mockery here? Most confusing.
MonicaTheGreat On January 01, 2010




Laredo, Texas
#15New Post! Oct 04, 2009 @ 05:43:30
@CannonJnr Said

lol ill need to read it again tomorrow im to tired to take it in. its interesting though to say the least



@mistyblues Said

I say, what mean you by this? Supposed to be written from respect of Lord, or mockery here? Most confusing.



nope not at all actually.
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