The lyrics to my new song...

See what you think of them and what you think its about.... please

CPR lyrics:

VERSE 1

Where you goin' with that on?
Who you seein' with those eyes baby?
Why're you turnin' the light off?
I'm sick and tired of stayin' here alone,
The streets are empty it's cold outside,
Takin' a walk in the rain from me to hide.

Come a little bit closer,
Come a little bit closer.

I'd follow you ......

VERSE 2

Can I come with you baby?
I'd follow you into hell to see your eyes,
Can I walk with you baby?
Can I walk with you baby?
The streets are empty it's cold outside,
Takin' a walk in the rain from me to hide.

Come a little bit closer,
Lets get a little bit closer.

Can I come with you baby?
Can I walk with you baby?
Come a little bit closer,
Let's get a little bit closer.

It reminds me of this song lol, i like the lyrics of yours though

Artist/Band: Bentley Dierks
Lyrics for Song: Come A Little Closer
Lyrics for Album: Modern Day Drifter

come a little closer baby
i feel like layin you down
an a bed of sweet surrender where we
can work it all out
there ain't nothin that love can't fix
girl it's right here at our finger tips
so come a little closer baby
i feel like layin you down
some a little closer baby
i feel like lettin go
of everything that stand between us
and the love we used to know
i wanna touch you like a crimson robe
and let it wash all youu hurt away
so come a little closer baby
i feel like lettin go

if there's still a chance than take my hand
and we'll steal away
off into the night
until we make things right
the sun's gonna rise, on a better day

come a little closer baby i feel like strippin it down
back to the basics of ou and me and what makes the world go round
every inch of you accross my skin
i wanna be stronger than we've ever been
so come a little closer baby
i feel like strippin it down

come a little closer baby
just a little bit closer baby
come a little closer baby
i feel like layin you down

Hmmmmm the lyrics to that song are waaaaaaaaay better than mine

lol your lyrics are really good, dont be hard on yourself. it's all in what you take from them, i am not one of those people who just listen to music for the sound.

i listen to the lyrics and the underline meanings

Do you get the meaning to mine?

to me it is talking about a person whom is on the verge/(already lost) of losing someone they still love.

Nice one

thanks, lol i kinda relate to those kind of songs, music is something that has always been there for me when no one else was

i really like the lyric s man well done@!!!!

could this perhaps be the Next unearthed (for guys outside of aus its a program
done by Triple j radio to unearth new bands)

Cheers

Same. Its consistent

If anyone wants this song pm me ur email add and I'll send it to ya - free of charge


Seriously though..... its not a bad song.

w00t and I love the song!