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Ready for love...the great poem!

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smart On April 17, 2007




maradhu, Maldives
#1New Post! Jul 25, 2006 @ 16:53:46
Ready For Love
by SMART

Take my hand and lead the way;
tell me all you want to say.
Whisper softly in my ear,
all those things I want to hear.
Kiss my lips and touch my skin;
bring out passions deep within.
Pull me close and hold me near;
take away my pain and fear.
In the darkness of the night,
be my beacon, shine your light.
In the brightness of the sun,
show me that you are the one.
Give me wings so I can fly;
for I can soar when you're nearby.
Enter my heart, break down the wall,
it's time for me to watch it fall.
I've been a prisoner, can't you see?
Break my chains and set me free.
Strip me of my armor tight;
you'll find I won't put up a fight.
Release my soul held deep within . . .
I'm ready now, let love begin.
sweetrnsugar77 On December 22, 2008

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My Apartment, Oregon
#2New Post! Jul 25, 2006 @ 16:54:35
Not bad, a little long for the rhyming for me but its sweet.
reginashusband15 On August 18, 2006




Ottawa Lake, Michigan
#3New Post! Jul 25, 2006 @ 17:41:22
very nice
melissarae On September 23, 2006




North Fort Myers,
#4New Post! Jul 25, 2006 @ 17:43:12
i think its absolutely beautiful!!!
dreamdestined On September 28, 2006

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, Michigan
#5New Post! Jul 25, 2006 @ 19:26:52
You have talent. You should consider entering it in a contest.
smart On April 17, 2007




maradhu, Maldives
#6New Post! Jul 26, 2006 @ 01:59:59
hei guys..thanks for da comments..am so happpy that i have got some talent tho!
hottie1 On November 13, 2006




derby, United Kingdom
#7New Post! Jul 28, 2006 @ 15:04:05
nice one it brill
bishbashbosh On April 24, 2007




London, United Kingdom
#8New Post! Jul 30, 2006 @ 14:29:08
I loved it
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