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jonkers On April 26, 2012




brick, New Jersey
#1New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 07:18:55
ive been dreaming a dream
for the past so many days
trying just to imagine
in about a thousand ways
how one day i'll wake up
and be lying next to you
oh' and its these dreams
that help me make it through
cause tommorow i may hold you
and tommorow i may not
but tonight i still dream of you
cause these dreams i've always got
so on these long restless nights
that you are not by my side
know my feelings of love
are impossible to hide
cause when i start to close my eyes
i know my every word is true
in thought and in heart
i start to dream of you
xnuvax On April 06, 2010

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SYDNEY, Australia
#2New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 08:26:11
Another excellent poem by you! I love it.
hope On March 17, 2015




haifa, Israel
#3New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 08:30:17
beautiful , i luv it
jonkers On April 26, 2012




brick, New Jersey
#4New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 14:31:18
@hope Said

beautiful , i luv it



i feel many women would like this poem i think i write love poems pretty well
xnuvax On April 06, 2010

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SYDNEY, Australia
#5New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 14:31:53
@jonkers Said

i feel many women would like this poem i think i write love poems pretty well



You sure do.
sweetheart5545 On November 06, 2013




, Florida
#6New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 19:20:50
@hope Said

beautiful , i luv it


me too
smilelove On September 01, 2013
Ninja Dreamer





Somewhere, Ohio
#7New Post! Apr 20, 2009 @ 20:31:00
Very beautiful.
jonkers On April 26, 2012




brick, New Jersey
#8New Post! Apr 21, 2009 @ 03:33:48
@smilelove Said

Very beautiful.



thks for ur comment hope more ppl keep liking my work
mcstitchpt123 On July 01, 2015




on the beach, New York
#9New Post! Apr 21, 2009 @ 04:09:36
SO FAR I HAVE ENJOYED EACH POEM YOU POST
KEEP IT UP!
loveis On January 15, 2010
brat-inella


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In the mirror,
#10New Post! Apr 21, 2009 @ 17:52:14
Sweet words!! : )
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