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KCup On October 08, 2009

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, Benin
#1New Post! Jan 10, 2009 @ 23:49:14
When you found me I was broken,
I was destructive and hateful,
You came and you loved me,
You fixed me,
I?m grateful.
I try and I try,
It?s so hard to be truthful,
So many lies deep inside,
All So dark and so hurtful.
I love you. I say it again and again,
Do I feel it, I don?t know,
Words are easy to say,
So much conflict inside,
So much guilt, so much pain,
Feeling pressured and trapped,
To believe what I say,
I tried my hardest believe me,
I struggled to change,
I?m not who I?m being,
I?m just a mask and a name,
But with you blissful and ignorant,
I?ll keep trying invein,
Because despite all my delusion,
Your keeping me sane.
Christen On March 03, 2009

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Medina, Ohio
#2New Post! Jan 10, 2009 @ 23:53:35
Wow that is so lovly i love it very touching and very deep very good. You have really great words for your poems and I hope that you keep on writing poems. I write poems and I just put one on here a minute ago but it was sad.
sassi On February 20, 2009

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Coolangatta, Australia
#3New Post! Jan 10, 2009 @ 23:55:50
Real good stuff
KCup On October 08, 2009

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, Benin
#4New Post! Jan 11, 2009 @ 00:03:47
Thanks guys.
Allyson On January 20, 2010

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, Michigan
#5New Post! Jan 11, 2009 @ 00:11:08
This is touching,good
ReAdSaLoT On September 23, 2019




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#6New Post! Jan 11, 2009 @ 00:29:48
Nice work, your muse must be back in order. I'd call it profound; keep at it. Jazzreadsalot
BeTTyBeLL On November 28, 2010
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Kosciusko, Mississippi
#7New Post! Jan 11, 2009 @ 00:33:36
I've never read something that hit so close to home before...it is like you were in head, but a year ago...
KCup On October 08, 2009

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, Benin
#8New Post! Jan 11, 2009 @ 00:40:19
It is a poem very close to me.
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