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blacroce On March 16, 2016




Titusville, Florida
#1New Post! Mar 28, 2008 @ 22:42:01
Ok this is basically a short lil story about my lifes hard times and yea its pritty boring but to make it a lil more interested i tried making it into a poem.



Life Story



I tried so hard to make things right
i just simply couldn't put up a fight
i was rushed into things that no child should face
i brought nothing to my family but shame and disgrace
I cried and cried but no one cared
I had done something bad, and now i was scared
Forced from home to a place far away
I just hoped and hoped, day after day
Hoped that i would soon go home
but no sign of that seemed to show
Finally after a year or so
i was able to be let go
Back home i went with a new self pride
U could see i had changed by looking into my eyes
I had endured the worst possible fear
being taken from home for a whole f***ing year.
After that things seemed to be great
I was back at school and going at a good rate
I kept to myself and ignored the bullies
But my angry side started pulling
finally i had had enough, couldn;t hold back no more
I flipped out and let the anger through the door
From there on out, problems arose
I hated everyone who dared to appose
I didn't hold back anymore
i would flip out and walk out the door
that was what they saw, but deep down inside
My inerself was constantly trying not to cry
I moved away hoping to get rid of the pain
But as soon as i arrived, i went insane
people were the same, and I no different
I was soon falling into an downward movement
now it seems i will not recover
I have tried everything that was there to discover
I think I have one more shot
Down in the souths boiling pot
If i do not succeed, my life will be worthless
But everyday i pray to god that this will all be worth it.

deademo On June 22, 2020




anthony, New Mexico
#2New Post! Mar 28, 2008 @ 22:52:16
dude this rocks !!!!!!!!!!!
jeanettesianrachel On September 16, 2016




Medway, United Kingdom
#3New Post! Mar 28, 2008 @ 22:59:06
very good,and its screams out pain and hurt your poems are always so good,keep that pad near you and just put down things that come into your head,to keep the wonderful art you have. x
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