I am entering the Junior playrights festival here in Deleware. I need your help! Please tell me if this sound good for a play. Is the plot good? how bout the charecters? Would you want to go see this play?? TELL ME!!! I NEED THE ADVICE AND FEEDBACK!!!
ok here it is.
Characters:
Schylar: Female (( AKA Schy {sky} )) Main character/story based character
Diana: Female (( AKA Dii {die or dy} )) Co- character/ second based story character (best friend))
Craig: Male Co-character/ second based story character (( best friend))
John: Male Co-charater/ third based story character (( aka Guy in the band ))
Kevin:Male Co-character/ third based story character ((aka another guy in the band ))
Personalities: Schylar: Crazy, funny, somewhat becomes and "outsider" to friends, Hair changes weekly,at times is the "cheerer uper" and at others is the "i need a cheerer uper" type of moods, spur of them moment type of person, isnt all so much serious all the time, can put to much trust in people, forgives but doesnt forget, verry emotional, loves most things, doesnt let much bring her down, verry disorganized,a dreamer.
Diana: More serious then playful, verry "conservative", makes the most sense, is the most comforting, a goody goody type of personality, would do anything for friends, doesnt like change, verry organized, is a "true"person/ sticks with reality.
Craig: A little Shy, funny, verry verry comedic, happy, tall, open minded, band manager, smart.
John: sarcastic, funny, loud, out there, happy, always there, loving,
Kevin: Shy, serious, happy, giddy,impatient, stays the same.
Story: The charecters are in a band. That is what they do to "get away" from school and things.
Plot: When Schylar, who is verry close to her friends, becomes depressed, she begins to turn away from her group of friends (( Diana, Craig, John,and Kevin )) Her friends relize that soething is up when she doesnt show up for band practice ((they have a rock band)). Craig ((who secretly likes Schylar)) Trys to call her many times and she doesnt answer. Diana begins to take things into her own hands and when she shows up at schylars house, Schylar is mad. Diana and Schylar get into a huge fight and Schylar breaks away from all contact with any of the group. No one knows why Schylar is so upset, she doesnt even know herself. Kevin ((one of the friends in the band)) Becomes sick and is admitted into the local hospital. Craig gets a hold of Schylar and notifies her of the news. She wants to visit Kevin but is so ashamed of herself that she cant. Weeks go by and Kevin's sickness gets worse. One day when all the friends are there Schylar shows up. She walks in the door and it as if all is forgiven. The friends make up and Kevin miraculously begins to get better. In the end they are all back together and Schylar knows that nothing should keep her away from keeping her friends close. This is a story of drama and suspence