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rcm58 On April 11, 2008




Bristol, Tennessee
#1New Post! Jul 25, 2007 @ 22:14:47
Into the night
Without sight
And clouded by a dream
I took her hand
And talked the talk
The hour that it seemed
Had given way to a new day
And with it came my eyes
The beauty in the words you shared
lend crediance to your soul
You stumbled and you stammered though
Its evident you glow
And in the end its you friend
That I would like to know.
loveis On January 15, 2010
brat-inella


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In the mirror,
#2New Post! Jul 25, 2007 @ 23:37:19
Awwww, that is so so sweet!
tchgal On November 09, 2008




, Virginia
#3New Post! Jul 29, 2007 @ 19:03:36
That is a very nice poem. I thought it was very good. I write poetry myself, so this comment is coming from a peer (so to speak).
seashells On October 26, 2007




nottingham, United Kingdom
#4New Post! Jul 29, 2007 @ 19:05:49
that was good very sweet
rcm58 On April 11, 2008




Bristol, Tennessee
#5New Post! Jul 31, 2007 @ 19:10:58
Thanks everyone!
unspokenwords On October 16, 2019




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#6New Post! Jul 31, 2007 @ 19:16:07
hmm, it was nice.
quietlycrying_me On February 10, 2009




nowherespecial, Ohio
#7New Post! Jul 31, 2007 @ 19:26:25
Nice!
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