A Rose for my love, a thorn for my rose.

The sweet smell, so radiant and blossoming.
The color, so bright and illuminating.
My love, as sweet as the sight.
My love, as beautiful as the color bright.
For you, my love, a promise to you.
For you, my love, my heart is true.
To me you give, the chill of fear.
To me you give, the warmth of a sky so clear.
Replaced with a thorn from the rose, my gift.
Replaced with the pain of the cut so swift.
Embedded is the thorn, too deep to remove.
The pain still there, too much to illude.
My pain, my sorrow, embedded, it's true.
And all from that single rose, that I gave to you.
From my love came a broken soul.
And it all came from that rose as beautiful as gold.


Well you like? I just made it up on the spot.

Not bad.

quite romantic

Gee thanks... I meant for it to give off the impression that A girl loved a boy, and they started dating, then when the girl's love peaked, the guy decieves her and breaks her heart... then after many years the pain still lives inside her. Did any of you get thet?

Well thanks for reading it anyway.

Well, at least I got two replies.

The sweet smell, so radiant and blossoming.
The color, so bright and illuminating.
My love, as sweet as the sight.
My love, as beautiful as the color bright.
For you, my love, a promise to you.
For you, my love, my heart is true.
To me you give, the chill of fear.
To me you give, the warmth of a sky so clear.
Replaced with a thorn from the rose, my gift.
Replaced with the pain of the cut so swift.
Embedded is the thorn, too deep to remove.
The pain still there, too much to illude.
My pain, my sorrow, embedded, it's true.
And all from that single rose, that I gave to you.
From my love came a broken soul.
And it all came from that rose as beautiful as gold.


Well you like? I just made it up on the spot.

Sorry. I just wanted to write it again. lol

It's beautiful

Thanks... It didn't take long.

Nice poem.

I like =D

Quite moving to say the least!