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I call this one "Mirror Mirror"

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anekri On March 09, 2008




Riverside, California
#1New Post! Dec 16, 2006 @ 02:42:25
Mirror Mirror

Tear me down
What do you see?
Do you see the pain?
Do you see the hate?
What about the shame?
The ignorance of fate?
Do you see me naked?
Or can you see right through me?
Or can you find, what lies behind
Or spiteful, bitter, "Just sue me"
Can you see the angst?
Do you see the vain?
What about the mirror?
Or maybe you see nothing?

Well, I can stand here
Torn down
And what you decide to see
Is probably not anything, remotely resembling me
And while you try to examine everything I've failed
And while you try to analyze all that I've done
I'll look into a mirror, I'll tear myself down
And I'll examine and analyze and see
And I'll look into the mirror
And it's different
And it's something else
Something you can only see
When looking into a mirror
roseheart On June 10, 2008




whiteny point, New York
#2New Post! Dec 16, 2006 @ 05:20:13
wow !deep, i would like to see more if you dont mind. dont know why but i love to read other peoples pomes. uesed to write pomes but could never get up and sare them so its nice when someone els dose
anekri On March 09, 2008




Riverside, California
#3New Post! Dec 16, 2006 @ 06:34:22
wow! THANKS A LOT Roseheart!! I really appricate that!
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