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"Shut the door"

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unidentifiedangel On September 09, 2009




Quezon City, Philippines
#1New Post! Mar 30, 2006 @ 20:58:06
Shut the door, your screams are too loud.
They pierce into my head leaving it shaken.
The stomping of your feet shatter my inner peace.

Shut the door, I dont want to see your face.
Scrunched up with anger and deformed by hate.
Your eyes make me feel cold inside.
My heart beats faster as it stares me down.

Shut the door, I am getting weaker inside.
Darkness seeping through and taking over what's left.
Surrounding me.. Taunting me..
Till I cannot bear it any longer..

The door is closed.
realgonekid On December 08, 2007

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Liverpool, United Kingdom
#2New Post! Apr 10, 2006 @ 01:50:27
i like that
unidentifiedangel On September 09, 2009




Quezon City, Philippines
#3New Post! Apr 11, 2006 @ 03:51:22
Thank yee!
thegorillas On November 10, 2006

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United States
#4New Post! Apr 11, 2006 @ 04:16:26
Thats very good. Great job!
unidentifiedangel On September 09, 2009




Quezon City, Philippines
#5New Post! Apr 11, 2006 @ 17:39:51
Thank you.
wristband On July 19, 2009




Emerald City,
#6New Post! Apr 25, 2006 @ 20:24:00
That ending was so cool! It was written well through-out, and the last line just finished it perfectly! (And it made me smile)
unidentifiedangel On September 09, 2009




Quezon City, Philippines
#7New Post! Apr 26, 2006 @ 02:26:38
Awww thanks. I just wrote it on the spot. I saw your work and it was pretty good too.
yourownwords On February 12, 2007




, New Jersey
#8New Post! Apr 27, 2006 @ 19:18:59
I'm not that into poetry, but this is really good. I felt it!
unidentifiedangel On September 09, 2009




Quezon City, Philippines
#9New Post! Apr 28, 2006 @ 09:52:01
Thank you so much!
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