Post in Forums
Create a Profile
Upload Pictures
Keep a Journal
Meet Friends
It's FREE!
Sign Up!
xhardcorexscenexkidx last visited June 22, 2007 xhardcorexscenexkidx


More Pics

Über-Commander
150 points


16/F/Tecumseh, Oklahoma
Join Date: May 2007

My Stats
Age: 16
Gender: F
Location: Tecumseh
Oklahoma
United States
Posts: 37
PLS: ? 45.02
Joined:: May 29, 2007
Last on: Jun 22, 2007
Profile Views: 78
Reputation: 2

 
ProfileJournalFriendsPostsPicsPollsSend PM
xhardcorexscenexkidx
TFS Journal
Public entry "Nothing To Live For"
May 31, 2007 @ 12:27:35 am
Everything around me shadders to pieces,
All they do is stare,
Thier poisonous chemicals float in the air,
Killing me with every breathe I take,
I feel more and more pain with every move that I make,
They will never know what it feels like to be me,
They will never see,
The scars still haunt me in the shadows that stand before me,
I'm still living in the nightmare from yesterday,
It will never go away,as if they were made to stay,
I'm still living in the past,
I have nothing to look forward to,
and there is nothing left to do,
Grad a gun stick it to my head,
Five seconds later.....
BAMM...
I'm dead,
My memories and shadows have been left behind,
Nobody will ever see,because it was all just in my mind,
Time stands still as I lay in the dark,
Then it all ends with a horrifying spark,
My life flashes before me,
I'm moving so fast I can't see,
Before I know it,I realize I'm standing in the same exact place I started,
Left with nothing to do,
I can't feel myself,
The echo's of voices surround me,as if everything wasn't meant to be,
I'm stuck in this place and have no way out,
Nothing will ever satisfy me or make the pain go away,
So let me bebecause I'm made here to stay.

Quote | Reply


emo_nightmare


Über-Meister
2351 points
May 31, 2007 @ 12:32:25 am
I seriously love your poetry. I can really relate to how you feel.


negasable


Monk
36704 points
May 31, 2007 @ 12:32:44 am


ambee


Meister
1237 points
May 31, 2007 @ 12:35:09 am
I was just wondering what made you feel that way? That you have nothing left to live for?? I too like all of your poems I have read so far, all the emotion, they are amazing!


xhardcorexscenexkidx


Über-Commander
150 points
May 31, 2007 @ 12:46:37 am
haha thnx yall!!!!
I just write what i feel i dont try to make s**t up like what most people do...
my mom was like they are good but its always about death or some s**t i was like well i write what i feel "mother" I said that I am a emotional poem writter and that is the way i ALWAYS feel!
but just write what u feel.

Quote | Reply

Pages: 1

"Depression has taken over me,this world will never be the same again,time will always stand still as I lay in the darkness of your shadows."

TFS Time: Fri 05 Dec 2008 11:41 am CST
Copyright © 2004-2008 Funky Llama Productions, LLC   |   Home   |   Contact   |   Privacy Policy   |   Terms of service
Proudly hosted by Liquid Web

 
The Forum Site - Your premier source for everything