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16/F/Tecumseh, Oklahoma
Join Date: May 2007

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xhardcorexscenexkidx
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Public entry "Unspoken Love"
May 29, 2007 @ 08:25:22 pm
Another poem....

I saw you standing there in the crowd,doing nothing but looking down,
Tears streaming down your face,my heart starts to move to a faster pace,
Everything around you starts with violence,then it all comes to an end with nothing but silence,
Everything keeps falling apart,you try to explain but never know where to start,
All you can hear is the screaming of people pleeding for a new life,but they will never know how to pay the price,
you slowly fall to your knee's onto the ground,
My heart races faster and faster then begins to pound,
You take one last breath then you think your dead,
but everything just begins to go back to normal to be started over again,
as if everything was unspoken or never to be said.

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emo_nightmare


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May 29, 2007 @ 11:37:08 pm
Thats deep


jeanettesianrachel


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May 30, 2007 @ 01:38:17 am
a very deep and emotional poem,a totally believable one that seemsthe writer has knowledge of the pain that the poem speaps off.



xhardcorexscenexkidx


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May 30, 2007 @ 11:59:44 pm
u think thats deep??
have u read the one down at the bottom of the page?
i wrote one last night it is a page and a half long..front and back so yea.


emo_nightmare


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May 31, 2007 @ 12:07:04 am
Wow ur really good.


ambee


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May 31, 2007 @ 12:24:59 am
standing ovation very good, filled with pain that I now feel.

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"Depression has taken over me,this world will never be the same again,time will always stand still as I lay in the darkness of your shadows."

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