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terrortrain last visited June 13, 2007 terrortrain


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Join Date: Jun 2007

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Public entry Introduction of me
June 11, 2007 @ 09:27:18 am
Ok, im a 20 year old apprentice chef from Sydney, Australia. I just discovered this site by accident, but so far its pretty good. As you may have noticed i like to write poetry so feel free to read them and comment. I enjoy constructive critisisum as well so don't be shy. I also like meeting new people so feel free to send me a message if you want. Have a great day people.
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Public entry Another short poem
June 11, 2007 @ 09:22:20 am
The Wicked One

When the night falls and the moon is full
When no dawn of day is left in sight
Then will all dreams come to an end
Untill then I will wait at the firey gates
Awaiting for the father to unleash us all
Then the wolf will devour all mankind
With innocent tainted by all this lunacy
With all questions unanswered
And all hopes have since come to an end
Then soon will be born the dragon's child
He'll cleanse the earth of all mankind
One in a thousand lifetimes
Bound by his own hatred
In his own personal hell
"Abandon all hope who each are here
For this is where all dreams are left behind..."
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Public entry Some of my random poetry
June 11, 2007 @ 09:21:22 am
The Twilight Embrace

In a dew soaked dawn of one distant day before
I sat and watched the morning waves
As they crashed gracefully against the sandy shore
While I sat still entraced in my vacant state
Unaware that she stood their watching me near
When in the morning twilight I caught sight
Of that beauty so fair and full of grace
Her eyes in a trance upon the rising sun
As her elegant steps begun towords my position

She made her approach, as her pale skin
Reflect the light a firey red against the dawn
As if in trance my eyes could not detache
Hypnotised by shoulder length hair black as night
Eyes of forest green reflecting the light at mine
Lightly she move across the sand so taken was I
So still in my morning bliss as I gazed upon my prize
When suddenly she came awake from trance
And made a dash towards me

While still at rest upon the sand she fell into my embrace
Her darkened forest green eyes entracing
Giving me a friendly lust fill smile and gaze
Full of mystic romantic air my heart full of joy
As my frail nerves begun to shake in my wanting lust
A firey beam of light then lit up the morning sand and shore
As my lips met hers completely at home and in love
Caressing her cheeks red in the morning light
I held her close as my eyes heard her whisper
Something so beautiful as a single tear of joy
Cascaded from her beautiful eye.

She was abandoned by those nearst to find love
Within someone from the other side of the world
Safe in eachothers embrace and love
Finding comfort in her arms I felt peace for the first time
An angels who could whisper word into my ear
Shattering every fear in an instant filling me with joy
My dearest friend, and my passonate lover
Recalling the most passonate love it hurts
More so than any pain i ever felt.
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