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Meister
1065 points
16/F/Brighton, United Kingdom
Join Date: Nov 2006 |
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Title: The way you make me feel
You make me feel special,
You make me feel new,
You make me feel loved,
With everything you do.
You hold me close when I am sad,
You wipe the tears from my face,
Every time we are together,
It feels like the perfect place.
My eyes light up when you enter a room,
I smile when we are together,
No matter how bad things are,
You always make them better.
I love the way you kiss me,
And the way you hole me tight,
I love the way you touch me,
I could be with you all night.
I love the way you can make me laugh,
For absolutely no reason at all.
I love the fact that no matter what I do,
You’ll be there to catch me when I fall.
I just want you to know,
That even though we fight,
I will always love you,
No matter what, day or night.
comment it please :]
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smilelove
Mega Über-Meister
3534 points | | I like it. It's sweet. |
cduck
Cunning Linguist
9969 points | | I only read the first bit and i got fed up of all the you this and you that. Sorry, but i'm only being honest |
angel21
Über-Minister
15083 points |  thats not a nice thing to say |
cduck
Cunning Linguist
9969 points | | I know that's why i said, sorry. But i've come across a lot of poetry like that and it just seem's easy to do...Too easy! |
angel21
Über-Minister
15083 points | | Writing poetry is never easy to do, could you write something |
cduck
Cunning Linguist
9969 points | Gettin' Jazzy
Rainy thinkin' floatin' 'bout the room
Driftin' sweetly outta the gloom
Feelin' blue at the cryin' boom
your'e strollin' tones and rhymin' tunes.
I'm seein' music fly in bubbles
it's easin' off all ma troubles
my thundery hearts beatin' double
clearin' ma soul of all it's muddle.
Melody blossomin' loud n mellow
from some devil in the soul
bouncin' round in and out of holes
now and then and so long ago.
Blasting out little bombs of sound
echoin' screeches travel round
blarin' and screamin' in the town
the sound of jazzy patterns resound. |
angel21
Über-Minister
15083 points | | Difference is your 38 she is 15. I think its an achievement in its self having the bottle to upload it in the first place |
lexxel
Über-Minister
15374 points | Magical entrance of beauty
Enlightenment of tranquillity
A vision of serenity
For like an angel you
You’re heart is so rare
That spans throughout time
Your smile is of passions set free
For your eyes is like heaven to me
I will always treasure your heart.
Beautiful friend from a land afar |
cduck
Cunning Linguist
9969 points | | I basically tried to be critical but not abusive.O.K? And i don't mean that sarckyily. |
cduck
Cunning Linguist
9969 points | lexxel said:
Magical entrance of beauty
Enlightenment of tranquillity
A vision of serenity
For like an angel you
You’re heart is so rare
That spans throughout time
Your smile is of passions set free
For your eyes is like heaven to me
I will always treasure your heart.
Beautiful friend from a land afar
Well that's poetic enough for me! Much Better than you're signature! |
lexxel
Über-Minister
15374 points | your poem is wonderfully written and from the hear
i too do write and well - its usually geneuine feelings towards a person who brings that out in me |
random666
Meister
1065 points | | Thanks for the support guys -.- |
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