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Points Whore
931 points
16/M/Saint Louis, Missouri
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Please, only death metal fans post comments. This is not for the weak hearted. It is a Gore
Death MEtal song I wrote called "Chainsaw Molestation." Turn now if you have a weak
stomach.Here it is.
CHAINSAW MOLESTATION
Pull chain, buzz, teeth
With a saw comes sodomy
Continuous, turning, gnawing
Eating through rectal tubing
Cutting, slicing, choke
Shove the saw down your throat
Swallow
Life leaking from your eyes
My art, the public will despise
Your remains, unrecognizable
Chopped finely, desirable
My f**king cock, ready to explode
Shoots on your bloody remains, unload
Red fluid leaks from the remains
Playing, sexual, horror, fantasy games
My work gives me intense pleasure
My f**ked mind cannot be measured
Save my ferocity for my next erection
Get the saw to find more satisfaction.
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Darkshine
Ogler
28539 points | Oh wow.
I'm a fan of metal and all that, but just know that being violent doesn't draw in crowds.
Having meaningful things to say do. Who wants to hear about you getting off over someone
getting cut up?
Write for passion, not just to piss people off and act hardcore.  |
petrofsky
Points Whore
931 points | To guy above me.
I appreciate your reply and suggestions, but I do do that. I have written mainly songs about
depression and isolation. Unfortunately, I am the vocalist of a death metal band, so we need
to sing (or growl, however you want to put it) about something mrbid and evil, and I think I
did just that in this piece. Many death metal bands write about this kind of stuff. It just
matches the sound. Cannibal Corpse and Exhumed are good examples.  |
Erlend
Ogler
23446 points | | I don't know jack s**t about death metal, but I'm pretty sure that a title like Chainsaw Molestation won't impress anybody. Apart from that you seem to be well on your way to stardom. |
Erlend
Ogler
23446 points | Cannibal Corpse said:
The father of three was impaled on the wheel,
as his skull became a part of the dash
His eyeballs ejected his sight uneffected, he saw his own organs collapse
I give up.  |
petrofsky
Points Whore
931 points | I really don't care about populatirty at all. If anything, I do not want to have a popular band,
or I am no better than s**tty poser bands like Korn and Slipknot. I only want devoted metal
listeners to listen to my music, not pop culture fans. |
gasolinerainbow
Debater
6474 points | petrofsky said:
I really don't care about populatirty at all. If anything, I do not want to have a popular band,
or I am no better than s**tty poser bands like Korn and Slipknot. I only want devoted metal
listeners to listen to my music, not pop culture fans.
thats a pretty good reason.have a kudo.
and a biscuit.
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x_Laura_x
Abominable Snowman
82602 points | You write kinda like Cannibal Corpse...
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purple_and_gold
Mega Über-Meister
3252 points | Sometimes i get the urge to write CC style lyrics. Its very fun to write with little emotion sometimes. It helps alleviate anger. I like to write from a guys perspective generally. I can be more creative that way.
Heres some lyrics i wrote a few months ago, its too lyrical, it wouldn't be a good song because its too rhymey:
'Keepsake from my first affection' (Yes, i realise its not a very metal title)
your flesh, alabaster,
entices my scalpel,
i hack into veins,
tear off bloody mouthfulls,
you try to resist in a futile attempt,
as i f**k you in holes one could only have dreamt,
i'm carving your meat with my tools of demise,
my dagger is splicing through your feeble eyes,
internal bleeding,
now we are feasting,
rats gnawing off fingers and toes,
gore and despair,
my orgasmic throes,
the more i hack you to bits,
i delight,
languishing in your blood drenched sight,
forgotten tears now roll down your face,
i'll bludgeon your head in with a mace,
the empty space inside of me is filling up,
with images of lacerated organs and limbless stumps,
delectible flesh is now mine for the taking,
merciless laughter all through your raping,
blood fills your eye sockets,
no longer can you see,
i'm blinded with pleasure,
the gore laid out for me,
your lacerated c**t,
i defile with a smile,
beg me to stop,
the harder i f**k,
my cum rushes into your body,
now your half dead and choking on vomit,
you quiver and twitch as you beg me to stop,
i'm addicted to your c**t and can't get enough,
slashing your face and hacking your limbs,
what better things to do to my 'friends'?
ahhhh,
one final spasm before your demise,
remember my hot seed now burning your eyes,
i've hacked out your c**t and savour the taste,
a keepsake from our very first date. |
petrofsky
Points Whore
931 points | You disgust me in the best way possible. Holy s**t, those lyrics kick a** dude. I am working
on a song right now called "Sacromantic Mutilation" |
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