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Meister
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hel
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Public entry angel died...girl dies
June 09, 2006 @ 10:24:12 pm
a poem i wrote..

the silence rings through the doors ,
un-sounded footsteps creak the floor ,
The angel lived here once ,
the girl died here last month .

Its like a memory that wont leave ,
the sky showers down water that drips off the trees.
the holy cross touched her mind,
in the room that the angel died .

A shadow in the door way ,
what seems to be a girl appears but doesnt stay .
noone lives there anymore,
just a sprit that only touches the first floor.

everyday that passes by,
the next person who enter will wish she would die.
but she wont leave ,
in the heart of the dark house where she bleeds.

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rockoutgal


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June 09, 2006 @ 10:24:46 pm
wow...thats reallly good...


hel


Meister
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June 09, 2006 @ 10:26:39 pm
thanx


poetnevermore


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June 10, 2006 @ 12:47:31 am
What a great poem! I liked it.


hel


Meister
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June 10, 2006 @ 07:38:24 am
poetnevermore said:
What a great poem! I liked it.


thank you


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