my poem that is...well...uh....depressed???

"broken promises. plastic kisses. no-one misses. me."

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heart_broken
just...shut the hell up ok

my poem that is...well...uh....depressed???
June 26, 2007 @ 03:48:43 am

i f**king cut
i f**king bleed
but dont dare think
ill let you see
cos i keep it hidden
under my sleeve
always remember
looks can decieve
nothings ok
or how it seems
more pain
a cut i recieve
cos i f**king cut
i f**king bleed

--i know this is a bit dramatic...but i thought id post it anyways. lol

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dark_angel9313 Mega Über-Meister 3127 points	June 26, 2007 @ 03:59:40 am
	cool i like it it's dark depressing my style

unspokenwords Points Whore Master 66726 points	June 26, 2007 @ 04:04:26 am
	You should stick to poetry to cope with your problems, no more cutting.

heart_broken Points Whore 903 points	June 26, 2007 @ 04:10:31 am
	im telling you the truth i mean this im ok trust me.......

emogrrl420 Mega Über-Meister 3497 points	June 26, 2007 @ 04:10:37 am
	i write sad poems sometimes too. but you have more guts then me, i couldnt ever post mine.

lilly_morgan Über-General 598 points	June 26, 2007 @ 06:23:42 am
	teddy!!!!!!! wat wud ur mummy say if she read that!!!! ......it is very good though......

clarity Commander 100 points	June 26, 2007 @ 06:35:58 am
	deep and emotional

kit Minister 12362 points	June 26, 2007 @ 10:58:29 am
	I like it It's nice and straight forward and in your face. It's really good. You should post it on one of these websites where you can put up poetry and stories. Seriously.

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