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deademo
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August 06, 2008 @ 02:53:05 am

You say words
They come and
They go
They hurt
They burn
The scars
they leave behind
They make me cry
They are there
To stay for all eternity
All is done
all is said
Soon enough
I will be dead

But remember me
Remember that
Remember
all the good times that we had
too bad they are all gone
Along with me
And the cuts in my wrist
And the blood dripping slowly

Obsession will take over your mind
It will rot you from the inside
Making you believe that your beloved
would fall in your arms again
Even though they clearly said
Ill never love you
Ever again

Ill advise you to take my words
wished I thought of them before
so id end up happy or sad
and not in this grave yard buried
dead but alive

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loveis TFS Monkey 44600 points	August 06, 2008 @ 03:09:01 am
	Good job!! Keep up the good work ` get them feelings out!!

springshowers Über-Meister 2015 points	August 06, 2008 @ 03:12:48 am
	Better to write than cut. This is the only way to let your emotions out not hurting yourself take my word for it.

deademo Meister 1031 points	August 06, 2008 @ 03:18:06 am
	yeah i kind of stopped doing that i think it s better to deal with it although cutting made it all come out ,like my anger

xoxorockerkittyxoxo General 319 points	August 10, 2008 @ 07:33:37 pm
	That was very good. i liked it alot. excellent poetery

deademo Meister 1031 points	August 11, 2008 @ 02:46:45 am
	thanx

Scoobiedoolala Minister 10988 points	August 11, 2008 @ 03:14:09 am
	talent! good to see talent in writing.

deademo Meister 1031 points	August 11, 2008 @ 03:15:03 am
	theres talent in my voice 2

Scoobiedoolala Minister 10988 points	August 11, 2008 @ 03:35:48 am
	but we can only see your voice.

deademo Meister 1031 points	August 12, 2008 @ 04:33:59 am
	i guess so

basha Minister 11897 points	August 12, 2008 @ 04:59:14 am
	Nicely done, good imagery, this is what i do to get crap outta my head too!! I find it quite therapeutic!! Everyone needs an outlet. Let your soul bleed instead of your body. At least thats how i put it anyway but then i've never felt the need to hurt myself. Nothings ever that bad hunny XXX

poisonsbeauty Points Whore 756 points	November 01, 2008 @ 04:40:11 am
	...this is my love life... Kudos, you write with the purest of emotions.

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