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Public entry "Somewhere Out There"
August 22, 2005 @ 02:53:27 am
I search for non-existent lands,
the mystic touch of golden sands,
the glitter of a wanted dream,
a folklore song to help redeem.
Stepping through the looking glass,
no longer here, it moves so fast,
the rain falls cold onto my skin,
release the anger held within.

Just another piece of mind,
nothing here for me to find,
say so long and kiss my hand,
I know you'll never understand.

I speak for thing no other's know,
believe in things that never show,
my mind; the mirror of fantasies,
will search for more than 7 seas.
The wings that sprout on destiny,
bring out whatever's left in me:
saphire trees of autumn's kiss,
the angel's feather of new born bliss.

Just another piece of mind,
nothing here for me to find,
say so long and kiss my hand,
I know you'll never understand.

Go, jealous skies of reality,
kill the depression you give to me,
I sing to angels, fairies, elves,
to anyone who has lost themselves.
I lead the people who think like me,
who want to flee such truth they see,
to dip our feet in silver lakes,
to live a dream and never wake.

Just another piece of mind,
nothing here for me to find,
say so long and kiss my hand,
I know you'll never understand.

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shaggyjebus


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35882 points
August 22, 2005 @ 02:55:00 am
Hehe, journals come up as topics, just in case you didn't know. But now everyone can see it as a journal and as a topic!

This is a remarkable poem . . . maybe a song . . . it's beautiful. It really is. You are a great writer.


claudiadepointedulac


Points Whore
816 points
August 22, 2005 @ 03:22:05 am
thank you


shaggyjebus


Monk
35882 points
August 22, 2005 @ 03:22:59 am
Sure thing. I was just telling the truth though.


bandylank


Über Master Debater
8426 points
August 22, 2005 @ 05:41:16 am
I think shaggyjebus is right! Get some music for it!


claudiadepointedulac


Points Whore
816 points
August 22, 2005 @ 07:31:41 pm
*pulls music out of thin air* TADA! Seriously though, if there are any musicians out there who think they could help me out in getting some music to go with it. . . let me know


chloe2t


Über-General
425 points
September 22, 2005 @ 05:55:06 pm
i saw your reply in my intro, and since i like to write also, i thought i'd check out your poetry. And I'm glad I did. you have real talent, a rarity in itself,lol... but also you have something to say( a.k.a. not poetry just for poetry's sake, which i don't like... but a message too. hope to see more of your work as I go on here!!

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