it is not finished (obviously)
pleas tell me what you think.
scene 1
EXT.at park under a tree, day
John is sitting under a tree with his head up and eyes closed
voices
jump up and down and all around. jump up and down and all around. jump John! jump!
EXT.street, day. beginning credits
john walks down the street
scene 2
EXT. to int. house, day
John unlocks and opens the door and takes his keys on a counter by the door.
John walks further into the house and shuts the door
INT. bathroom, day
John is on the toilet. John stands up while pulling his pants up, and zips and buttons his pants.
John opens up the medisen cabinet, grabs a bottle of pills, closes the cabinet, opens the bottle, takes a pill into his hand and puts it into his mouth. sets down the bottle, turns on the bathroom sink, fills his hands up with water and takes a drink from his hands, and splashes some water on his face and rubs his face with his hands. than he grabs the hand towel and drys his face with it.
scene 3
INT. kitchen, day
John sits down at the kitchen table, where their is a note book open to a blank page. he stairs at the page as words appear:
Get there john
you can dooooo better as your thoughts go onnnnn....
get to the place where they can't fined youuuuuuu.....!???!...
get to the place. and i will show yoouuuuuuuuuuuuu......
death to john!!!!!!!!!
deeeeaaathe toooooo johnnnnnn....!
deth tooooo joooooohhhhnnnnn!!!!...
john
no!!!!
john grabs the notebook and throws it a cross the room, grabs his head.
cut to:
john quickly opens a drawer and rapidly goes thru its content. he comes to a pill bottle . he picks it up, shakes it than opens it only to fined nothing.
JOHN
damn it!
john throws the empty bottle on the floor
cut to:
john is paesing back and forth in his kitchen on the phone.
JOHN
come on, come on!
someone answers the phone. john stops paesing.
JOHN
hi, i was wondering if you have a prescription there for john harson.
short pause.
JOHN
ok, I'll wait.
longer pause.
john rubs his face. something catches his eye outside of the front room window. he goes towards the window and looks out of it.he seas a short demising creature running around on his front lawn in a circle. the creature runs out of sight. john moves his head around trying to fined the creature. the creature slowly emerges from the floor of the porch and stairs at john with a twisted grin on its face.
JOHN
go away Grogen.
he points his finger at the creature.
the creature jumps threw the window, tackling john to the ground.
voice on the phone
sorry, we don't have a prescription for a john harson.
john is on his back on the floor with the demon sitting on johns belly. the creature smiles at john, waves and disappears.
john gets on his feet.
JOHN
sorry, what was that.
VOICE ON THE PHONE
we don't have a prescription hear for you. sorry.
JOHN
kay.
scene 4
john pushes a button to hang up the phone, than pushes the button agen and dials a number in, and puts the phone up to his ear.
JOHN
(quickly)
Steve, Steve, Steve.
Steve
john, whats up man?
JOHN
(quickly)
i godda get it, i godda get it, godda get it man.
john puts fingers thrue his hair and grabs his head.
STEVE
woh man, what is it?
JOHN
i need it! there all gone!!!
STEVE
okay, you know what man. Im coming over kay?
JOHN
yeah yeah.
STEVE
kay, im on my way.
john hangs up the phone. he stairs at the floor.
JOHN
okay... okay... okay... godda get it godda get it.
he looks up to the sealing.
JOHN
yep, yep, yep.
scene 5
john walks to the door and stands in front of it and stairs strait ahead.
john's mind takes over his senses. he sees at a park he sees a little girl with pigtails swinging on a swing. the girl stops swinging, slowly turns her head facing john and her pigtails pop off her head and float to the sky. she quickly takes her head off and throws it at john.
john comes back to reality as there is a knock on the door.
he cracks the door open a bit and peeks out side to see Steve. john then opens the door to let Steve in.
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