i wrote this poem myself. i want to know wat u all think. it is titled Love.

Love is like a maze,
that is meant for two.
Love is like a maze,
that few get through.
Love will come,
Love will go,
Love will be around,
when you don't know.
Love is something,
I will get through.
Because I am one,
amd you are my two.

awww that is super super sweet! i love it!


Set me free, your heaven's a lie...

that was sweet.
very cool. what else ya got? lol
thx for the review on mine


Arie

moving. passionate. real.

lol ty all for ur feedback on my poem. i might put more on here at a later time so keep expecting to see it lol

that is really sweet yu are proper talented

all i write about is love

it is actually hard to write about it because you have to think outside the box of this stereotypical love


your just jelous because that i can act retarded in public and people still love me!!

as there isnt a super clapping smilie this will be it for a while its great



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your just jelous because that i can act retarded in public and people still love me!!

*in ironic scottish accent that i have almost nailed on the head* its truue



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lol behave lol i think it was written from the heart


your just jelous because that i can act retarded in public and people still love me!!

the poem is true



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is it?


your just jelous because that i can act retarded in public and people still love me!!

yes it is yes it is



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ok lol

~cuddle~

every1 check all my poems out :D


your just jelous because that i can act retarded in public and people still love me!!

*splutters* plant *splutters*



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