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New Post! Apr 21, 2008 @ 09:36:48#1
lostangel91

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Why do people judge a gal on wat she used to be?
Why cnt they understand why cnt they see
My hart was with some1 but he don’t know I exist
What am I suppose to do because I just want a kiss!
I gues I am everything that they say
I am a retard in every single way.
I wanted to tell him how I felt from the start
But he acts like I’m just a mate which breaks my heart.
Its time to change my ways even though it’s hard
Oh my god I am a total RETARD!!!


i did this out of my head ages ago while i was on a free at college lol so dnt know wat ull think


i didnt loose my mind i sold it on EBAY!!!

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New Post! Apr 21, 2008 @ 10:14:25#2
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I'm no expert but I like it!


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New Post! Apr 21, 2008 @ 11:13:22#3
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thnx

its really random lol


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New Post! Apr 23, 2008 @ 06:40:29#4
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Im really sweet on one of My best friends too. Im tryin to figure out what to do about it! How to fix it withoutblowing the whole damn thing.


Sie ist magisch. Sie ist schön. Sie ist Liebe, und Sie ist Mein Freund.

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New Post! Apr 23, 2008 @ 08:07:53#5
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i sorted it out i wrote him a letter and gave it him


i didnt loose my mind i sold it on EBAY!!!

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New Post! Apr 25, 2008 @ 02:08:20#6
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lostangel91 said:
i sorted it out i wrote him a letter and gave it him


How did that go? See, I dont wanna mess up the Friendship. But Im feeling pretty strongly in love, its quite a mess now. We are great friends. It really blows, this whole situation, and Im not liking myself much for having these feelings for My Friend You know? I wish I didnt, but I do.


Sie ist magisch. Sie ist schön. Sie ist Liebe, und Sie ist Mein Freund.
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New Post! Apr 25, 2008 @ 10:11:37#7
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well he had a gf but he appreciated that i was truthfull and dat i really liked him

he doesnt see me any different than b4 i told him

he doesnt even treat me different

just go 4 take a risk ... if you love him its worth the risk.


i didnt loose my mind i sold it on EBAY!!!

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New Post! Apr 26, 2008 @ 02:43:28#8
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We'll see! I appreciate Your advice. You rocks


Sie ist magisch. Sie ist schön. Sie ist Liebe, und Sie ist Mein Freund.

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New Post! Apr 28, 2008 @ 08:18:49#9
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i get paid to give my peers advice all the tym i love the feling of helping ppl


i didnt loose my mind i sold it on EBAY!!!

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New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 20:49:53#10
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Lostangel i think it is pretty good. it isnt as dark as u think it might be lol

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New Post! May 12, 2008 @ 08:18:33#11
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that 1 isnt but it makes me laugh lol :P


i didnt loose my mind i sold it on EBAY!!!

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New Post! May 12, 2008 @ 21:26:15#12
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lol as long as u like it then it does not matter wat others think

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New Post! May 12, 2008 @ 21:38:40#13
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Most people's most compatable partner start by being a friend, it is when they (if they do) become partner's that becomes best friend. I do not like the word retard but you are not what anyone else says you are, you are who you say you are & you seem an intelligent person to me, reach for the stars girl & you shall have your day.



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New Post! May 12, 2008 @ 21:45:29#14
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Without calling yourself a RETARD and replacing that word with another, it is a very beautiful poem.

Straight forward and not planned but rather thoughts put to paper which is what poetry should always be IMO.


I laugh, I love, I hope, I try, I hurt, I need, I fear, I cry. And I know you do the same things too, So we're really not that different, me and you.

Colin Raye

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New Post! May 13, 2008 @ 10:42:35#15
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lol ta hun lol


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