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New Post! Nov 08, 2005 @ 23:33:04#1
the_undertaker

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46/M/Middlesex, United Kingdom
Join Date: Oct 2005

Another year have come and gone,
And you're still standing here today.
Be glad you're not six feet underground,
Because you're doing better than okay.


Please cherish every moment you have,
For every second could be your last.
Look forward to your future,
Never exclude us from your past.


Your emotional pain can never be erased,
But I'm here to scrub my best.
Have the patience to wait with me,
While I clean up your emotional mess.


It's not often you find a friend,
Who could read your mind and soul.
One who could lead and also follow,
The path you chose to go.


I would be here many birthdays later,
And I hope you'll do the same.
For without you in my life,
I would choose myself to blame.


Please don't think I don't love you,
Because I haven't said it enough.
Because I do and always will,
Nothing can lessen this bond so tough.


There's two type of people who loves you,
And I'll name them both to you.
Your friends because they care,
And your family because they always do.


So when you're feeling down and sad,
Read this poem with my voice in mind.
Every word means "I love You."
And "I'll never leave you behind."

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New Post! Nov 09, 2005 @ 00:11:34#2
shadowangel1221

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22/F/Hurricane, Utah
Join Date: Nov 2005

Wow, that was good!!!!!!!!!

On November 09, 2005
New Post! Nov 09, 2005 @ 09:14:16#3
justvr

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109/M/, Wallis and Futuna
Join Date: Oct 2005

There was a young man from Leeds,
Who swallowed a packet of seeds.
Loads of grass grew out of his arse,
while out of his ears grew weeds!

Now thats poetry!

On February 20, 2006
New Post! Nov 10, 2005 @ 07:08:30#4
wristband

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21/F/Emerald City,
Join Date: Aug 2005

Undertaker, that was really good! You never cease to surprise and delight me w/ ur writing. It was deep yet light-hearted. There was no confusing or awkward composition; it just flowed. It was really sweet, 2. I re-read and pretended it was someone writing it to me. Maybe that's lame, but your writing is so universal yet personal, that I really felt moved.

On July 19, 2009
New Post! Nov 17, 2005 @ 00:00:09#5
mhee

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26/F/,
Join Date: Nov 2005

awwwwwww very nice

On March 05, 2006
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