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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 02:53:40#61
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Its tooooooo easy

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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:01:07#62
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I like calosn he speeks the truth and hes bringing love
but hes using to big of words he doesn't know the meaning of..ha ha

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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:21:48#63
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mr_thug_line said:
i bust up in this b i t c h wat u c iz wat u get nigga u can copy this cuz when i bust up in this i got tha 140 with me u never could think that s**t just wave yo f**kin levle bitch im im stackin chip up in this bitch i ant got to tell u s**t 4 real g


rating this out of 50 it gets 9
nothing is worse than this rhyme
cuz this bitch rhymed off "this bitch" at least 6 times
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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:30:17#64
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nirvanachick said:
yo so my names torrie.
yall better listen to my story.
cos all your raps,
were so god damn borin!!!


What story does a corny 40 year old girl named Torrie have for me that isn't boring ??
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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:36:11#65
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mr_thug_line said:
i got crime on mi mind thankin of robbin a bitch ho im in a bad mode bitch sept to me u got get smoked bitch


Come on smoke me hold me up and choke me
I'd rather be dead than to read that s**t you wrote "g"..
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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:46:20#66
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marwan said:
Yo i have a bro and hes called seif,
hes an a** or shoukd i say dufus,
no offence but all of u suck,
and im the one, baby i rock
Now scream crowed
and be proud cause your rapper is here
Marwan Ragab


Okay that was completely garbage just stop okay Bob
pray to God no-one read that and just stick with yo day job
Fuckin' stop
your not a rapper if you rhyme suck with rock
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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 12:10:50#67
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Hot cross buns
Hot cross buns
one a penny, two a penny
Hot cross buns.



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New Post! Mar 22, 2008 @ 12:13:58#68
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Yo i got some hot cross buns buns yo
yo i got some hot cross buns buns yo
G i stole ya 2 pennies
G I ate ya moms buns too!

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New Post! Mar 23, 2008 @ 23:18:25#69
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stunt nope homie break yourself,
we use your type for crash test dummies you better brace yourself,
you hate haters thats why you hate yourself,
if only you had listend you could have saved yourself,
but you just won a no return one way ticket to see god you can take yourself,
you love goin down on your girl cuz you can taste yourself,
call me smoke if you wana i can b bad for your health,
your a** wont get burnt boi your a** will melt
you say your ice cold yet you tellin me to turn up the heat,
acting like the head of the house i sit in the president seat,
be wise take my side or be left seated under my feet,
me and you 2nd place is last place if its a two horse race,
but im a cheater im here to win i aint gona argue the case,

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New Post! Mar 24, 2008 @ 20:45:27#70
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deathraven said:
I like calosn he speeks the truth and hes bringing love
but hes using to big of words he doesn't know the meaning of..ha ha


get a dictionary, I'm a girl by the way


Nobody made a greater mistake than he who did nothing because he could do only a little. -Edmund Burke
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New Post! Mar 25, 2008 @ 04:57:49#71
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dagoddesslatoria said:
i aint english BUT WHAT THEE bloody F-ing HELL the TOPIC label did say rap that aint crap RIGHT or am i trippin Seriously i think this site need to rethink the topic FORUM for HIP HOP because hardly any of the members can relate...REAL TALK....SO to ALL the HATERS of RAP MUZIC DONT HATE HIP HOP BECAUSE U AINT HIP HOP u dont see me coming in that gothical music that yall listen to or that metal STATING MY opinion DO YOU hell naw SO STOP HATIN
cause even if a rapper spilt is guts on a track yall still be talking SHEEUUT because why you cant relate HIP HOP need to just be taken from this site TOO many HEAVY metal and gothic SH*T going on
TO all the people LOVE HIP HOP and still remain a believer
where THE HELL YALL AT and NA NA NE BOO BOO TO ALL YOU HATIN ASS FOOLS


It's interesting that you tell people to stick to freshmen high poetry when you have yet to provide anything that can be considered better. I will be kind enough to give some advice though. Stick to learning basic English. You seem to be from an English speaking country, but have yet to learn where to use capitalisation, commas, fullstops or any other basic grammar. I'm baffled as to why you felt 'music' should be typed out as 'MUZIC'.



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New Post! Mar 31, 2008 @ 15:33:34#72
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I dont know what to say
so what's up, hey
I thought i would put some real raps in, btw my name is ray
people in here like kayokane
rappin the same lines repeatin "yourself" insane
but what do i got to lose or gain
lost half of my self tryin to understand all this crap and the lower part of my membrane
rain
pour
bring all yer raps to me so i can grade them compared to the ones at the cornerstores

all you seem pretty down to earth
but is actin gansta mean that much to you, whats it worth
i give props to calonso in here
proves that girls can rap better sometimes and not u queers
yo and obviously she knows what words she usin
if not then why would they be in a rap that makes since and not abusin
the real way to make raps
well anyways you all have a nice day
come to me with yer raps so i can grade, no wait...stay
payce.

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New Post! Mar 31, 2008 @ 15:35:48#73
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i hope that was easy to read and proper enough for u eloquent bastards to understand

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New Post! Mar 31, 2008 @ 15:40:27#74
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Hey diddle diddle
The cat and the fiddle
The cow jumped over the moon
The little dog laughed to see such sport
And the dish ran away with the spoon


Word to your mother!

Peace out!


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New Post! Mar 31, 2008 @ 20:46:55#75
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blackwidowbambi said:
Hey diddle diddle
The cat and the fiddle
The cow jumped over the moon
The little dog laughed to see such sport
And the dish ran away with the spoon


Word to your mother!

Peace out!


AWWWW! Plagerist!


Nobody made a greater mistake than he who did nothing because he could do only a little. -Edmund Burke
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