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New Post! Apr 30, 2008 @ 13:22:03#1
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Jack found himself not being able to think straight it was so bad he began to write a story about nothing. he found that he helped this create a certain feeling of surrealism as he continued, his whole day came flooding back from breakfast to dinner. for jack, his pen was a slave writing everything that popped into his head. from kings- human and animal- to jesters jack thought alot about lion prides and countries leaders not taking much in as they were purely what his pen in conjunction with his hand were creating. it is truly wonderous to see the two inventions working so well together. could this partnership of amazement be the meaning of co-operation and love?
althoug as the pen feels no pain eventually IT WILL DIE, (and jacks hand had cramps several times as he did not streach) jacks hand felt every bump of the paper as he made his mark on to what he had realised was the third member of a sick and twisted threesome of a white sheet coming alive while a pen dies and didgets created by god become sore.
in the midst of all this hurry up and confusion a wooden surface gets just a little bit worne and faded. this is unbeknown to jacks pen so it continues to write all that it can to ensure the life, the fading,the cramp and ultimately its own death.

the death of jacks pen can be seen by all and if looked after may become a meaningful artifact a product of jacks mind.

PEACE TO ALL
we/everything on this planet has a life cycle, as this paper will burn, jacks pen will die, his table worthless if not just for sitting and fadeing

JACK HAS CRAMP


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New Post! Apr 30, 2008 @ 13:24:43#2
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you are one person out of a billion and capps offends u that much!!!! there is more to life!
but thankyou for the advice


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New Post! Apr 30, 2008 @ 14:53:13#3
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*whisper* Is he talking to himself?


Why does sour cream have an expiration date? x4ndr4 is my adopted spoon

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New Post! May 01, 2008 @ 03:44:26#4
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*whisper* no one else was talking to me
because the level of sourness changes from a level that we can enjoy in all its whitness and creamyness to a level that is just plain uneatable?!?!?!? maybe!


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