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New Post! May 05, 2008 @ 22:25:29#1
arrian

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18/F/St. Paul, Minnesota
Join Date: May 2008

Who is this girl in front of me,
Who looks so dead inside?
All I see is anguish,
Bitter love and damaged pride.

Her eyes are cold and hollow,
And hold nothing else but tears;
And when I look inside them,
I can feel her every fear.

Her face is pale and gaunt,
As if she’s never seen the sun;
Perhaps it’s just because
Her life has come undone.

She stares and me with my own eyes,
She mocks me with my face,
She’s pretending to be me,
What a damn disgrace.

She mimics me with my own voice,
With everything I’ve said,
And sometimes I could swear
She hears the thoughts inside my head.

And when I move my hand,
She moves her own the same,
She has my thoughts and feelings,
She even has my name.

I struggle with this stranger,
Hoping to be free,
But how can I win this battle
when I'm only fighting me?


Set me free, your heaven's a lie...

arrian last visited June 03, 2008
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New Post! May 11, 2008 @ 07:26:11#2
uchihababe

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Join Date: Apr 2008

This is really good! it even rhymes...Really good


Girl who can kick ur ass

uchihababe last visited June 22, 2008
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